Tiak

You guys deserved better. L&A as leader's request.

Di Los Santos ga ada pedagang bakso pinggir jalan Bikin character story yang masuk akal yah, silahkan direvisi keseluruhan. Saya kasih kesempatan terakhir untuk revisi.

Character story tuh menceritakan bagaimana character development kamu di Los Santos, karena kamu roleplay di Los Santos. Jangan malah diceritain balik ke sumedang, ga masuk akal jadinya.

-Perbaiki kata kata yang seharusnya tidak menggunakan huruf kapital. -Marina itu bukan kota, marina adalah sebuah nama daerah di kota Los Santos.

Perbaiki kata kata yang tidak seharusnya menggunakan huruf kapital. Teliti, kalo sampe masih ada yang salah lagi saya archive.

To @Adiit221I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,TiakJG:RP Staff Team.

Perbaiki kata kata yang seharusnya tidak menggunakan huruf kapital. Diteliti lagi typo dan juga EYD nya.

Perbaiki penggunaan huruf kapital yg benar. Perbaiki EYD & tanda baca.

Off we go!

Bukti ga ada, silahkan reupload buktinya ke imgur.com Saya tunggu 1 hari, dari sekarang.

Reserved.

Los Malandros Motorcycle Club is an American-Mexican (hispanic) Bikers club, they appears to be liking American motorcycle such as Harley Davidson, Dyna and etc, Los Malandros Motorcycle Club were build upon understanding that real essence of the gang itself to protect the livilyhood Hispanic neighborhood around the most white & black area. HISTORY On August 21, 2015, There are four young hispanic guys tried their luck on gang life, The fours began doing illicit things and also ilegal, The couple of kids Name Danny Diablo, Andres Espinar, Xavier Delgado, Javier Montana. These couple of kids beginning to walk their own path of life, because of what just happen. Danny, Andres and Xavier stayed on Los Santos and created small time gang which later be known as Diablo Gang, then Joaquin and Javier had to serve in the Military because of Javier's strong family connection on the military or they had to serve time in Juvenile detention center which make them both very easily pick the former option. Danny, Xavier and Andres starts from small time gang slowly became the most powerful Criminal enterprise while both Joaquin and Javier had to manage by dealing drug inside the US military. While Javier tour time might end in around 2020, Joaquin was burried six feet deep. On September 22, 2020, These "Kids" are now grown man, and the small times gang back then became the most notorious Gang in the whole Los Santos. Danny, Andres and Xavier from small time drug dealers become Drug Lord and Kingpin for the whole drug enterprise that they run from the ground up. Little did they know their old friend just finished his tour and somehow manage to be dishonorably discharge from the military without a cent to his name he trying to contact his old friend. with his knowledge dealing drugs inside the military, they adapt their own unique ways of dealing drugs, Later on one of Javier's Connection in the Military contacted Javier looking for a ways to selling confiscated Illegal weapon captured by the military and looking to expand his business, with only one requirement it had to be more than your usual Street gang. Four hispanic guys then decided to make over the enterprises to motorcycle club to be more organized and re-brand themselves as Los Malandros Motorcycle Club. Story will be continued in character... OOC information. - Kami menggunakan aplikasi line untuk komunikasi OOC, dan juga ada discord. - Kami menerima siapapun yang memiliki keinginan belajar roleplay bersama. - Character development sangat dibutuhkan, karena kita roleplay sebagai 1%er biker. - Kami merupakan MC dengan ras hispanic, usahakan pakai nick hispanic juga jika ingin bergabung. Credits: - @Disable for supporting. - @Zuqal123 For the name. - @ONPOINT. @Gils For some biker guides, knowledges, and some mods & maps. - @JevieraJehan @NFSS @Donald123123 for make this shit happens.

L&A as requested.