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To @RidwanAnsI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,TiakJG:RP Staff Team.

To @JoekiI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,TiakJG:RP Staff Team.

Kalo kamu main di rumah, berarti kamu punya UCP banyak ya? Saya block semua ya yang lain?

Masih banyak kata yang salah seperti penulisan Los Angeles, perbaiki lagi mas @Joeki

Coba benerin kalimat ini, tidak efektif.

Bikin character story itu menceritakan tentang character development kamu di IC, tentunya harus ada cerita di kota Los Santos. Mungkin bisa ditambahkan mas.

Yakin UCP kamu cuman itu saja?

To @colonyKI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,TiakJG:RP Staff Team.

Incest ya mas?

UCP kamu yang lain saya block ya?

Nama gw kok ga ada ya? mau saya jadiin tikus hood? @ferdhiikav

Udah dibilang perbaiki tanda baca. Banyak juga kata kata yang kurang efektif. Edit dengan teliti, sekali lagi salah akan saya archive.

Perbaiki penggunaan tanda baca ya, perbaiki juga EYD.

Hmmm, yakin UCP anda cuman itu?