Emilia_Quinn [ROODESS]

[$IHateU$]

Character: Emilia Quinn

Origin: Iran

Story:

        Emilia "Wolthar" Quinn is an Iranian young lady was born in 22nd July at 1996. She is appeared brown eyeballs 'almond-shaped, and a couple of black thick eyebrows with Iranian natural's visage. Randall 'James' Quinn is the man who became the figure of a parents for Emilia after Her mother, Sophia Lahamed was die in 1998 precisely when Emilia was two. Emilia was spent her childhood for 7 years in Mashyad, one of a friendly town in Iran. Peoples mostly loved Emilia, especially to the household management of her family that was deteriorated. Weaving, helping door-to-door homework, to clean the streets as an activity was she enjoyed. Have no word ,"ah, it will be later" she keep boost her self to cast her laziness and raise the wind to make ends meet.

 

          In the middle of 2002, Emi and her Father was leaved from Mashyad and flight to Miami with a flight number 'AA7420', capitalized the bravery, five-ties of Rial or about seven hundreed in dollar - fought fate in Uncle SAM. Began to find out a door, job, relation, everything that She need to have it. Insistently of matters was they have to face, cultural adaption to racial disparity in the social environment. "No father, no. I can also make a living", Emi said in persian, She was tried to convince Her father that she is not the little maiden anymore.

 

       Few years passed, Emilia become more mature. She managed to achieve education independently at one of the University of LA. Get a bachelor with a good achievement index in Humaniora. Randall for a moment become fabulous to greet His beloved daughter with the tittle that she just carried. Presently, Emilia start living a new, better life in the west land. However, this is not the end, and the ball still rolling. The fine stage pose to be a new beginning.

 

 

 

Saya Gotya selaku pemilik account UCP ROODESS bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Emilia Quinn) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

[beebear]

-Tolong di jadikan sebuah PARAGRAF.

-Tolong di perbaiki penulisan pada EYD.

[$IHateU$]

4 hours ago, masaretard said:

-Tolong di jadikan sebuah PARAGRAF.

-Tolong di perbaiki penulisan pada EYD.

Maaf, itu kan sudah bentuk paragraf dan sesuai dengan penulisan pada contoh 

 

EYD yang dimaksud seperti apa min? mungkin yg mimin maksud frasa UK yang saya gunakan, setau saya memang seperti itu bentuknya min. tq

Edited May 20, 2019 by Gotya

[beebear]

-Itu belum di jadikan sebagai PARAGRAF.

- Cara penulisan huruf kaptial.

 

[$Rishad_McCortez$]

Apakah masih mau dilanjutkan lagi? @Gotya

[$IHateU$]

Itu sudah diperbaiki, kenapa di hapus komen saya.

[$Rishad_McCortez$]

Back to @masaretard

[beebear]

Tolong potonya secara Real Life, jangan SS dari In Game.

[$IHateU$]

Done, cek lagi.

[mafarid]

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