Cheavy_Mofujohn [ThiagoRussel]

[YoungPappy]

DONE GAN

[YoungPappy]

EDITED

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1 hour ago, Jaden Russel said:

EDITED

Jangan bump thread dengan kata-kata kayak gini kalau sebenernya belum kamu edit, masih banyak yang salah.
Gak usah kebelet megang senjata kalau CS kamu aja belum bener.

[YoungPappy]

sudah diperbaiki, mohon di check ulang.

[YoungPappy]

Sudah diperbaiki min, tolong di check kembali

[$AldynovBP15$]

On 2/17/2019 at 7:44 PM, AldynovBP15 said:

Gak usah kebelet megang senjata kalau CS kamu aja belum bener.

Kebanyakan kata "Lalu" di ceritamu. Kurangi penggunaan tanda koma "," juga.

[YoungPappy]

Sudah diperbaik kembali :) tolong di check lagi min

[YoungPappy]

Tolong di check gan :) @

AldynovBP15

 

 

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To Mr Cheavy ,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision toAPPROVE your request. And, your character story will be moved and activated immidiately in  24 hours, if in 24 hours you still cannot access paycheck feature, please do contact one of JG:RP Staff in the game for further action.

Sincerely,

Helper AldynovBP15,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.

 

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Hi,

Saya telah mereview character story kamu dan menemukan bahwa story kamu sudah memenuhi kriteria yang kami berikan. Dengan itu kami telah ACCEPT character story yang kamu buat. Mohon ikuti panduan di bawah ini untuk mengaktifkan character story kamu: