pending Kahlil_Witfield [powerfull]

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Character: Kahlil_Witfield

Story:

 

The year 1980, Denzel Chisolm had murdered a LEO - then he escaped out from his town and had an illegaly imigrant to the new city, when he arrived at the town he didn't have anything, so he worked in the bar at across street, he work harder to get more money to raise his social status. One night, he met a interested girl, so he greeted at her - talk to her for along night, the conversation is became to hot so he took her to a place then make a love with her, he knew that his relationship is forbidden so he married her secretly. After several years - Kahlil was born. Since his young, Denzel knows that Kahlil is same with his way - so he told everything he know about criminal to Kahlil, and Kahlil start to learn it.

 

Kahlil became an unsocial boy, he mostly stay in his house while every boy in his age is playing with his friends. When he young he already touched a knife, gun and anything. When he was 16, right at his birthday, his parent were murdered in front of him - he didn't recognised them 'cause he wore a mask, after that he was so angry of it, he decided to want to know who's behind this, so he search them, try to find them but they gone. Eight years after that assassins, when he was 24 - he became a boss of his organisation in his teritory and have a wide connections with the other teritory - he ally with one or two organisations, he had an informant - the informant said he knew who's behind the assassins of Kahlil's parents, he told him and then Kahlil's angry and he told to the lower to search him and make sure the informant is right.

 

Three years ago, the assassin was murdered with Kahlil's hands self - since that he became more powerful. One day he attended to unfamilliar place, he met someone - he knew that stranger is an agent of organisations then the agent said he offer something to him, after he thinking for awhile he accept the offer and they did shake hands. When he was 27, he had a properly house, a lovely wife and two kids - and they living with the happy between around them. Two years later he got the phone is ringing and he accept the call, the caller is his boss, the boss said he have to go to U.S he won't hear rejecting, he told that is urgent and immedietly - after that he told everything to his wife and he must to go tomorrow his wife accepted. 28 January 2019, he arrived at Los Santos International Airport and the journey is begin.

 

 

Saya Powerfulll selaku pemilik account UCP powerfull bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Kahlil_Witfield) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

[Nadeez]

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Just now, Xdannz said:

Hai @Powerfulll,

 

Sebelum melanjutkan proses pemeriksaan Character Stories, tolong dijawab beberapa pertanyaan dibawah ini:

• Apa tujuan anda membuat Character Stories ini?
• Tolong disebutkan semua UCP yang anda miliki!
• Tolong disebutkan akun forum yang anda miliki! (jika ada, tolong tag).
• Sudah berapa lama anda bermain JG:RP?
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Saya mengharapkan jawaban dari anda dengan sejujur-jujurnya, terima kasih.

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Saya powerfull menyatakan telah menjawab pertanyaan yang saudara berikan dengan bersungguh-sunguh, terima kasih.

[Nadeez]

18 minutes ago, Powerfulll said:

touched knife,

touched a knife,

 

18 minutes ago, Powerfulll said:

his parent were murded

murdered

 

24 minutes ago, Powerfulll said:

sure that informant is right.

the

 

25 minutes ago, Powerfulll said:

that assassing was murdered

the assassin

 

27 minutes ago, Powerfulll said:

the caller is his boss said he have to go to U.S he won't hear rejecting,

the caller is his boss, the boss said he have to go U.S, he won't hear rejecting,

 

28 minutes ago, Powerfulll said:

and he must to go tomorrow his wife is accept that.

and he must to go tomorrow, his wife accepted.

 

29 minutes ago, Powerfulll said:

Los Santos International Airports

Los Santos International Airport

 

Diperhatikan lagi tanda baca koma yang salah serta grammar yang salah juga. Gunakan titik untuk mengakhiri suatu kalimat.

[$marvel$]

5 minutes ago, Xdannz said:

touched a knife,

 

murdered

 

the

 

the assassin

 

the caller is his boss, the boss said he have to go U.S, he won't hear rejecting,

 

and he must to go tomorrow, his wife accepted.

 

Los Santos International Airport

 

Diperhatikan lagi tanda baca koma yang salah serta grammar yang salah juga. Gunakan titik untuk mengakhiri suatu kalimat.

Edited, makasih atas respon n koreksiannya.

[Nadeez]

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To @Powerfulll

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Sincerely,

@Xdannz
JG:RP Staff Team.