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188wolfblade

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About 188wolfblade

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  • Birthday 04/18/1998

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  1. To @rizal27I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@188wolfbladeJG:RP Staff Team.
  2.  To @rizal27 I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Kata hubung pada kata tempat haruslah dipisah, seperti "di kampusnya" I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely, @188wolfblade JG:RP Staff Team
  3.  To @Sandra01 I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Tolong ceritanya jangan dibuat di tengah tengah Perhatikan kembali cerita kamu, banyak kalimat yang sulit dipahami karena kesalahan pemilihan kata I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely, @188wolfblade JG:RP Staff Team
  4.  To @rizal27 I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Nama agama diawali dengan huruf kapital Kata hubung yang bukan kata kerja seharusnya disambung. I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely, @188wolfblade JG:RP Staff Team
  5. To @KoroYatoI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@188wolfbladeJG:RP Staff Team.
  6.  To @ryhnXXD I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Perhatikan mengenai penggunaan spasi, kata hubung yang disertai dengan kata selain nama tempat tidak perlu dispasi Nama bulan seharusnya diawali dengan huruf kapital Perhatikan penggunaan tanda baca, terdapat beberapa bagian yang seharusnya dipisahkan dengan tanda koma I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely, @188wolfblade JG:RP Staff Team
  7.  To @AnnisaSeptiani I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Perhatikan penggunaan huruf kapital, kata pertama setelah koma tidak perlu menggunakan huruf kapital I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely, @188wolfblade JG:RP Staff Team
  8.  To @ImNugga I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Masih banyak terdapat kalimat yang menggunakan that dan so secara bersamaan I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely, @188wolfblade JG:RP Staff Team
  9.  To @ImNugga I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Tolong perhatikan grammar kamu, terdapat kata yang salah seperti penggunaan "that" setelah "so" Perhatikan tanda koma, banyak kalimat yang seharusnya dipisahkan dengan tanda koma I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely, @188wolfblade JG:RP Staff Team
  10.  To @KoroYato I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request. Reasoning for said denial is listed below: Perhatikan mengenai tanda baca seperti pada kalimat pertama.. Seharusnya tidak perlu ada tanda koma antara tulisan "bernama" dan "Garry" Perhatikan mengenai penggunaan imbuhan, kata imbuhan "di" yang bukan kata tempat tidak perlu dipisah, seperti kata "disebutkan" I wish you the best of luck in the future. Sincerely, @188wolfblade JG:RP Staff Team
  11. Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
  12. Terima kasih.. Mohon perhatikan kembali mengenai penggunaan spasi.. Banyak kata yang seharusnya tidak perlu dipisahkan dengan spasi, seperti "di juluki"
  13. To @NamaForumI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@NamaStaffJG:RP Staff Team.
  14. Terima kasih atas revisinya.. Silahkan diperhatikan, masih terdapat typo pada paragraf tetakhir.
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