Deontay_Kahson [yungchiseel]

[yungchisel]

Character: Deontay_Kahson

Story:

 

 

 

Deontay Kahson was born at the outskirt area of Los Santos, Dillimore, 15 years ago. He was raised by his parents through their earning checks. When he was still an underage child, his parents got struck in traffic incident and both of them died while receiving an treatment. Deontay at that time didnt know about his parents unfortunate dead since he was a child. After the tragedies, the authorities sent Deontay to his grandparents to be his guardian, his grandparents live at the slums of Ganton area. Time by time passed, Deontay grew and get himself a new friends while he slowly adapt on new enviroment, but it turnt out would lead him into a misdemeanor leadings.

 

At the age of 14, his actions grows larger, Deontay mostly spending his time with his 'no good' friends as juvenile deliquent, stole a snack from vending machine around compton or maybe stole a precious thing that people have like accesories, pocket, and any more, every time he's home his grandparents always throws him some valuable and life lesson so he can guide himself into a better life, but all the words that coming to him goes out to his left ear. Although Deontay behavior, he still attends the school every now and then to learn but mostly to reduce his suspicion on his grandparents. Right now Deontay is on Gregory McCaine Highschool as an freshman student, he still kept his activity going on, struggling to decide his life path.

 

And 1 year have been passed, Deontay already left his grandparents and move to Willowfield slumps with his best friend at school, Shane Duncan after Deontay got a big trouble with his grandparents. Deontay and Shane are living together, move together and same struggle. One day Shane introduces Deontay his hideout, Jordan Downs street alleyway on Willowfield. Deontay met Shane's homeboy and they all makes a got relation each other. And now Deontay know about the purpose of his life, doing a good and a bad thing in his life, taking an high risk or maybe stay safe.

 

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[yungchisel]

13 hours ago, Javanicus66 said:



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To Mr / Ms yungchiseel,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Your character stories aren't fit-in with the "300 words" requirements.
2. The paragraph shuold be splitted to 3 breakdown line.

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Javanicus66,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.



Will be edited, asap.

[yungchisel]

@Javanicus66 have been edited sir.

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Reminder @Javanicus66 !

[$Javanicus66$]

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