ReligioN Posted November 7, 2017 Posted November 7, 2017 Nama UCP: ReligioN Nama Character lama: Thomas Minh Nama Character baru: Thorick_Caesar Jenis kelamin: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: USA Alasan penggantian nama: Ingin bergabung dengan suatu faction. Bukti screenshot penggunaan '/charity': Bukti Spoiler Bukti screenshot CK: Bukti Screenshot JAIL : Spoiler Screenshot CK : Spoiler CK Story : Spoiler Thomas Minh is a well-known drug dealer in the Idlewood area. he lives with a stepmother named Alex Sian in a small apartment located in idlewood. Her own stepmother never thought of Thomas, even though she was only her stepson, and Thomas's father and mother divorced when Thomas was sitting in school, making for his father to marry someone else, but Thomas's father had an accident so his father died, and now Thomas only lived with his stepmother. Thomas's stepmother just did not work anything but just spent time playing gambling. And one day Thomas lost his customers because most of his customers moved to someone else because Thomas's price was so expensive. So it makes it difficult to meet the economy. He was very disappointed with the incident, so he decided to use the drug for more than a month. The next day Thomas was found unconscious by a friend named Caroline McCalister. Caroline had been Thomas's friend since childhood and by that time Caroline had intended to take Thomas away. Caroline found Thomas with a lot of foam in her mouth so she decided to take her to the hospital. Thomas had lost his life to drugs. And in the end Caroline told the mother about the incident.
ijan Posted November 8, 2017 Posted November 8, 2017 Tambahkan kembali sedikit cerita dan sudut pandang orang ketiga pada "Story CK" kamu.
ReligioN Posted November 9, 2017 Author Posted November 9, 2017 19 hours ago, ijan said: Tambahkan kembali sedikit cerita dan sudut pandang orang ketiga pada "Story CK" kamu. Added @ijan
ijan Posted November 9, 2017 Posted November 9, 2017 Sedikit lagi, masih belum ada sudut pandang orang ketiga seperti (contoh: ibu, ayah, nenek, kakek).
ReligioN Posted November 10, 2017 Author Posted November 10, 2017 18 hours ago, ijan said: Sedikit lagi, masih belum ada sudut pandang orang ketiga seperti (contoh: ibu, ayah, nenek, kakek). Done, check it out.
ijan Posted November 11, 2017 Posted November 11, 2017 Accepted. Temui administrator level 2+ untuk mengganti nama dan origin baru pada character kamu.
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