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[CN] Platjey_Bruzwaine to Eigenhardt_Bruzwaine (Smoothy)


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UCP Name: Smoothy

Old Character: Platjey_Bruzwaine

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Eigenhardt_Bruzwaine

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: Netherlands

 


Reason for name change request:

Bosen nama lama.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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/jail

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/mp

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/myid

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CK Story:

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        On October 19 at 10 am, Platjey had just finished his homework, namely, cleaning the bed, showering and tidying up his clothes. He immediately rushed to his motorbike and was ready to work at his brother's gym. Before heading to the GYM he stopped for a moment to fill his stomach at the Palomino Restaurant. After eating and drinking he hurriedly walked to his brother's gym to work as the administrator of the gym which he had just yesterday exchanged with the dealer.
         After arriving at the GYM, he took off his helmet and riding equipment to tidy up and put it in the seat of his motorbike. He immediately walked into the gym and saw how dirty and damaged the gym equipment was. maybe the previous owner couldn't take good care of the GYM equipment. For approximately 5 hours to sweep and repair the broken GYM tools. After      that, it was only opened for GYM auctioneers to come to exercise.
         Because it was already 5 pm, the GYM was closed because there were no other employees to work. Platjey immediately closed the GYM and went home. Before going home he tidied up the gym so that it would be clean the next day. He quickly got on his motorbike and put on his riding gear and put on a helmet. After, half way to his house. Suddenly the motorbike stopped, it didn't take long for someone to come using a Sultan-branded car. He asked if he wanted to give me a ride. Platjey also said yes because he needed to buy gasoline. After he got into his car. Platjey had a very bad feeling. After that, the owner of the car stopped at the shack where anta was flat and got out of his car pointing a shotgun that was taken from his trunk. Platjey panicked because he didn't know anything.
          I think the purpose of the car owner is good but not, because at first it was good to give a ride, but it was just a lie but looking for prey to be robbed. Platjey also surrendered to God. Platjey was ordered to enter the hut with a shotgun pointed at him and ordered Platjey to put all his money. Because Platjey was annoyed with the robber's behavior. Platjey fought back with his bare hands but the robber avoided his punch and shot Platjey to death because he was shot in the chest and head with 4 hot bullets. The robber managed to escape.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Posted

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted
1 minute ago, Outworld said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. Sudah

2. Sudah

3. Saya sudah mempm bang opick untuk merremove suite.

4. Perampokan berkedok ingin membantu

5. sudah

Posted
8 minutes ago, Outworld said:

Silahkan PM forum bang opick untuk penghapusan suite ya.

Sudah saya pm, tinggal menunggu suite untuk dihapus,

Posted
1 minute ago, Smoothy said:

Sudah saya pm, tinggal menunggu suite untuk dihapus,

 

Oke, tunggu updatenya dari bang opick baru thread ini bisa di lanjutkan.

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