Ace_Kim [Rioadrian]

[Guest RioAdrian]

Character: Ace_Kim

Story:

 

             

 

 

Ace Kim was born in 1996 by a mother named Amanda Amelia and her father named Geogery Kim they live in United states, Ace's father died when he was 5 years old Ace's father died of a very severe disease that is heart disease when Ace was a small time playing as a doctor and wanting to be a real doctor and at that time Ace got his dream to become a reliable doctor, and when Ace was big he immediately looked for work that was desired by his ideals but when registering Ace was always not accepted.

 

Ace tried to find another job but Ace did not find it, and suddenly Ace's cell phone rang and Ace heard from his cellphone that the phoned his mother but his voice from the doctor and doctor said that my mother was in the hospital and when she was taken to the hospital she died, Ace was shocked by hearing the sound from her cellphone and Ace went straight home and sold the house, and when the house was selling Ace sell well, Ace decided to go to the city of Los Santos by cruise ship, when he arrived at the port area of Ocean Doks Ace immediately called a taxi.

 

When the taxi arrived Ace immediately boarded the taxi and Ace told him to the nearest department that could be rented, Ace was taken by the taxi driver to the nearest department and arrived at the apartment building which was very large and Ace immediately paid the taxi fee when Ace entered Ace and was greeted by the employee there and then Ace searched for an empty room in the air and it turned out there were still 5 empty rooms, Ace chose the room above then after Ace cleared his belongings in Ace's room, went to find a job and unexpectedly Ace accepted a taxi job and Ace started his new life happily forever.

 

 

 

Saya RioAdrian selaku pemilik account UCP Rioadrian bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Ace_Kim) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited July 8, 2019 by RioAdrian

[Ravian]

Masih butuh perbaikan:

• Harap penggal dengan baik satu paragraf jadi beberapa kalimat. Coba cari referensi di literatur lain, bagaimana contoh pemenggalan kalimat.

[Guest RioAdrian]

Done edited sir @Ravian

[Ravian]

Masih butuh perbaikan:

• Gunakan titik untuk memenggal paragraf menjadi beberapa kalimat
• Perhatikan lagi aturan character stories yang baru, per 21 Juni

[Guest RioAdrian]

23 jam yang lalu, Ravian said:

Masih butuh perbaikan:

• Gunakan titik untuk memenggal paragraf menjadi beberapa kalimat
• Perhatikan lagi aturan character stories yang baru, per 21 Juni

 

Sudah dan sudah membacanya tadi

[Guest RioAdrian]

Makasih udah ngasih tau peraturan CS yang baru bang @Ravian ganteng, wkwkwkwk

[Ravian]

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To @NamaForum

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account:

 

Sincerely,

@NamaStaff
JG:RP Staff Team.