GLitCh Posted April 1, 2019 Posted April 1, 2019 Character: Alligheiro_Nacastratos Story: Alligheiro Nacastratos was a boy who live in Turkey. He was born on June 21st, 2003. He was a good boy actually, he always did something sounds good, help each other, and anti-bullying person. It all happens before he got an accident, when he was walking with his girlfriend in the midnight, he stopped by 4 people with gun on their back, the 4 people named as 'black m4sked' put the gun exactly in front of the girl's eye, they ready to shoot. Nacas was panic, he tried to fight them, but the gun fire hit the girl's head quickly, Nacas has no time to save the girl. Because of this accident, he decided to move to America to become a mafia, and do some revenge. Nacas moved to America since 2 years ago, he start all the things from the zero point. He has no family, no money, and no friends. After 2 months of crisis situation, he got a job as a trucker, he work so hard. Something bad like illness, and tired didn't make Nacas give up. He keep try and try, until one day, he got a friends that ask him to have a job as arms dealer. It's not take a long time for Nacas to think, he accept that work and start learning for his revenge. 5 months after fighting for his skills, now he had become a great arms dealer, he is a leader for group called 'anti-mask', yes, that name used to fight his enemy. Now Nacas is ready, he search for the enemy area on his country before, he had a spy that is a member of 'black-m4sked'. 4 weeks on search, now he find his enemy and ready to plan the big revenge. He flight to Turkey with his people with his own planes. Nacas arrived at Turkey, 4 AM. He stayed at hotel for about 3 days to make sure enemies' area. Finnaly, after have a great conversation with his friends about the plan, he decided to go the the enemies motel, they all stay at Cloman St. 45, the 'Black M4sked' was currently meeting there. Nacas with his friends moved slowly but surely. In the front of the door, Nacas starts to knock the door, like a normal person, while others still waiting behind him. When someone get out the room, Nacas and his friends start shooting, they all get in the room, kills all the 'black m4asked'. They left the motel with all red. Nacas now 'wanted' there. He back to America and live in the city called Los Santos. Nacas continue his job and satisfied with his self. Saya GLitCh selaku pemilik account UCP hoaxyos2154 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Alligheiro_Nacastratos) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
richkravhenkoz Posted April 1, 2019 Posted April 1, 2019 26 minutes ago, GLitCh said: anti-bullying Penulisan istilah seharusnya tidak dengan huruf dengan garis bawah dan cetak tebal. 27 minutes ago, GLitCh said: nacas Penulisan huruf kapital pada kata. Cari lagi yang sejenis dengan kesalahan diatas, goodluck.
GLitCh Posted April 2, 2019 Author Posted April 2, 2019 11 hours ago, richkravhenkoz said: Penulisan istilah seharusnya tidak dengan huruf dengan garis bawah dan cetak tebal. Penulisan huruf kapital pada kata. Cari lagi yang sejenis dengan kesalahan diatas, goodluck. DONE IT, PAK!
richkravhenkoz Posted April 5, 2019 Posted April 5, 2019 On 4/1/2019 at 9:51 PM, GLitCh said: Finnaly Finally NOTE perhatikan kata kerja, ini adalah retelling, yang artinya semua dimasa lampau karakter anda akan diceritakan dalam Kata kerja ke-2/Verb 2. Gunakan Tense Past.
GLitCh Posted April 6, 2019 Author Posted April 6, 2019 16 hours ago, richkravhenkoz said: Finally NOTE perhatikan kata kerja, ini adalah retelling, yang artinya semua dimasa lampau karakter anda akan diceritakan dalam Kata kerja ke-2/Verb 2. Gunakan Tense Past. oke, udah pak.
richkravhenkoz Posted April 8, 2019 Posted April 8, 2019 On 4/1/2019 at 9:51 PM, GLitCh said: Alligheiro Nacastratos was a boy that live in Turkey. ...was a boy who live in Turkey.
GLitCh Posted April 9, 2019 Author Posted April 9, 2019 20 hours ago, richkravhenkoz said: ...was a boy who live in Turkey. edited, thanks for replying
richkravhenkoz Posted April 9, 2019 Posted April 9, 2019 On 4/1/2019 at 9:51 PM, GLitCh said: can't made Berhubung retell text, diganti jadi didnt make
GLitCh Posted April 9, 2019 Author Posted April 9, 2019 22 minutes ago, richkravhenkoz said: Berhubung retell text, diganti jadi didnt make Sip done, thanks.
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