Rivano2005 Posted March 17, 2019 Posted March 17, 2019 Character: Alfred Holland Story: Alfred Holland was born on February 4, 1996, with Alfred "Luther" Holland's real name in Compton, United States. Alfred has a father named Luther Holland and his mother Tomica Holland. His father sold food in his house, while his mother prepared food to sell. Everyday Alfred helps his parents to sell so life needs can be fulfilled. Alfred's father really wanted if he would later become a successful person Alfred passed, year after year, Alfred took education in one of the schools with makeshift facilities. He is very famous in his school because he is a child who has a very naughty nature. Even though he has that naughty nature, he gets values that can boast his parents. When he graduated from the vocational high school that he lived in, he decided not to continue his education and help his parents. One day, Alfred's father had an accident when he wanted to go to the market which was quite far to restore the stock of selling goods. Alfred's mother was shocked after hearing the news of what happened to Alfred's father, Alfred's father was taken to the nearest hospital to get intensive help, Alfred and his mother went to the hospital that brought Alfred's father, but after several days of coma, Alfred's father died of an accident in his nature, with the message that Alfred is a successful person when he grows up. Instantly one day, his old friend named Tyshawn invited him to lead a better life in one of the major cities in the United States. Alfred leaves his parents and goes with Tyshawn to migrate to Los Angeles. He traveled for 4 hours using the flight path. After arriving in Los Angeles, Alfred occupies his uncle Tyshawn's house. Alfred got a job as a mechanic in one of the workshops with the experience he had at the vocational high school that he lived at that time. Alfred works hard to earn a lot of income so he can meet his needs. Alfred also enjoyed his life properly in Los Angeles. Saya Rivano2005 selaku pemilik account UCP Facker1 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Alfred Holland) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Rivano2005 Posted March 18, 2019 Author Posted March 18, 2019 Dikit Dikit min Selebihnya Saya Ketik Sendiri Min
$Rishad_McCortez$ Posted March 18, 2019 Posted March 18, 2019 On 3/17/2019 at 5:06 PM, Rivano2005 said: Alfred's father asked his son to become a successful person when he was an adult Ini kalimat yang sekarang terjadi tetapi memakai past tense "was", jadi gak nyambung.
Rivano2005 Posted March 19, 2019 Author Posted March 19, 2019 20 hours ago, rishad_mcortez said: Ini kalimat yang sekarang terjadi tetapi memakai past tense "was", jadi gak nyambung. Edited, thanks!
$Rishad_McCortez$ Posted March 19, 2019 Posted March 19, 2019 Hi, Saya telah mereview character story kamu dan menemukan bahwa story kamu sudah memenuhi kriteria yang kami berikan. Dengan itu kami telah ACCEPT character story yang kamu buat. Mohon ikuti panduan di bawah ini untuk mengaktifkan character story kamu:
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