Allen_Bowman [Edmond]

[Soldado31]

Character: Allen_Bowman

Story:

 

 

                23 March 1990, an American baby was born named Allen Bowman. Sarah Spencher is so happy for the birth of his baby. In the same time Edward Bowman was at the business trip at Canada, in the meeting his phone is ringing, Jefferson hospital called him informed that his baby was born. After heard that news. Finished the meeting he immidiately rushed to the airport and arrived at Los Santos airport 3 hours later. He went to the hospital by taxi, rushed to the room where there is his wife and his baby. When he arrived in the room, he kissed his wife’s forehead as saying “Thanks my love, you fight by yourself to give a birth to our baby”. His wife smiled to him afterward, then he walked to his baby Allen Bowman looked at his eyes deeply and have a big smile to him as he muttering “This is my American Boy”.

                30 August 1996, Allen Bowman was entering the elementary school, all of the students are pure of American people, there is no immigrant there. When he was a child he oftenly watched criminal films which featured a lot of violence committed by black races, because of that he began to see a black races as a bad person.  28 September 2006, Allen’s friend was buliied by african-american gang in his High-School, until he must be treated in the Jefferson’s hospital, knowing about that Allen hated the African-American even more. So he decided to made an oposition gang / pure american gang in his highscool to fight the violence of the African-American gang. One month later, lot of pure American students have joined the gang. But Allen realized that quantity is not enough to beat the niggas, they need the /quality/. So, Allen as the leader of the gang instruct his member to gain more skill by following martial arts or practice between them and also do hard physical exercise. Three months later, they had developed their skills and strenght and ready for war.  In the Thursday 2 Februari 2007 as a gentleman,

          Allen approached the African-American base and met the lead of that gang. The atmosphere was very tense, they have no idea why Allen approaching them. The members is preparing to attack Allen, knowing of that the lead of the gang ordered them to not to do that. The leader, Elijah Broklyn walked slowly toward Allen asked him with what purpose he did come here. Without any stale talk Allen challange them to have a war between them and his gangs next week. After that Allen leaved them without waited any reply from the opposite leader. The day has come, East Los Santos field has been surrounded by dozens of people which is the members of the two gangs. The battle is inevitable, the war caused by racial hatred caused a lot of bloodshed. Suddenly in the war Allen bump into Elijah, Allen, who is very ambitious to destroy them immediately grabbed Elijah’s head tightly and hit his head with his knee hard repeatedly.

                Not only that, Allen dragged Elijah who had been lying weak to the basket pole hit Elijah’s head against the basketball pole hardly. Elijah who has a fairly severe head bleeding immidiately sprawled out. Instead of stopping, Allen continued to attacking Elijah especially on the back of his head, Allen stomp the back of Elijah’s head which caused him to fainted. Shortly after, police came to the location and stoped the war, Elijah was brought to the hospital. An hour later all of the peoples who involved on the war informed that Elijah has passed away and the SAPD made Allen as suspect according to witness testimony. Allen proven wrong and arrested in the teenager prison for 5 years for murdering and conduct a gang war. 11 February 2012 Allen was released from the prison and continuing his life as a redneck. He fought for his soil and sacrifie his blood, he sworn that he will sacrifice his life to fought for his soil, reclaiming America from African-American and Immigrant and all of the none American peoples.

 

 

 

Saya edmond selaku pemilik account UCP edmond bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Allen_Bowman) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Edited for :

 

- Wrong UCP, Soldado31 changed to edmond

- picture added

[$casualmind$]

Jadiin tiga atau empat paragraf, sama formatnya Justify gua bacanya pusing.

[Soldado31]

12 hours ago, casualmind said:

Jadiin tiga atau empat paragraf, sama formatnya Justify gua bacanya pusing.

Done babe @casualmind

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