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Character: Dennis_Sanchez

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          11th of December 1998, a child was born into a low-income Hispanic family. It was a sunny day, the clock shows 11:10 in the hospital room. A man in his 30s sitting next to a woman, holding her hand. He smiled, his face showed an expression of relief as the woman held a baby, crying softly. The man, Henry Sanchez, was a serial entrepreneur, at least that’s what he likes to call himself. Him and his wife, Miranda Lopez, works hard every day keeping their family afloat with whatever job they could find. But in this particular moment, their worries disappear as they gazed upon their child, their firstborn. “Dennis”, Henry said, “His name is gonna be Dennis”. Miranda gleefully nods as they pecks each other’s mouth in excitement.

          5th of July 2002, little Dennis was playing with his plastic toy car in the front yard. He notices a brown sedan slowly making it’s way into the driveway, a familiar car he’s ridden in a lot of times in the past. “Papa!”, Dennis shouts on top of his lungs, he pushes himself up and ran as fast as his little legs could carry him towards the vehicle. Henry walks out of the vehicle, a smile plastered on his face, he widely opens his arm and swiftly catches Dennis. “Dennis, my little boy.”, he said, “How are you, son?”. “I’m good, Papa.” Dennis gleefully answers as he’s slowly getting lowered to the ground. Miranda walks out of the passenger seat, her hands holding a piece cloth. There’s something bundled up inside, Dennis peeks curiously. “Is that the baby, mama?”, Dennis asks to then be replied with a nod by Miranda. “Meet your little brother, Kevin.”, says Miranda. This marks a pivotal moment in Dennis’ life, his little brother’s arrival to their household.

          Time passes, not a lot of stuff happened in the meantime, Dennis doesn’t pursue university, instead he decided to help his father fulfill the family’s needs. He started working any job he could find, before he know it, his schedules are packed. It was great, “Life is great.”, Dennis thinks to himself. Until one faithful day, it was the 18th of March, 2017. Kevin comes home with bruises all over him, “What happened?”, Dennis asked wearily. “Nothing.”, Kevin answered with a cold monotone as he hurriedly walks towards his bedroom. Dennis, fearing for his brother’s wellbeing, follows him to his bedroom. “You wanna talk about it?”, Dennis asks softly. “Nah, it’s fine.”, Kevin answered. “You sure?” “Yes.”. Dennis submits to his brother’s persistence, he drops the subject and goes to his room. Three days after the incident, Kevin went missing. Henry stopped working as he’s focused on finding his son, he files a missing person report, posts posters, and puts up posts on the internet, all in hope to find his lost son. Dennis, having a glimpse of idea of what might happen to his brother, contacted a man he wouldn’t have thought of contacting before. The man goes by the name Edgar Peña, an acquaintance Dennis made when working. The man was what one would call a ‘gang member’, not the kind of person one usually would turn to ask for help on this, or any kind of matters. The man agreed, in exchange, Dennis would have to work for the man for a period of time, three months to be exact.

          A few days later, Dennis was working for the man, driving him places, when the man’s phone starts to ring. It was Kevin, they found him. Dennis drove the man to a warehouse in a place called Ocean Docks. He saw a group of men, standing in front of the warehouse, the door wide open. Dennis steps towards the warehouse, his pace quickens when he saw a glimpse of a human being hanging by his feet. It was Kevin, he was beaten to death and hanged to rot in the warehouse. Dennis, stares teary-eyed, his gaze shifts from one man to another, as if looking for an answer. Edgar nods to one of the man, they were exchanging words, “It was a rival gang.”, Edgar said as he approached Dennis. “We’ll arrange for a retaliation tonight.”, Edgar continues “I’m in.”, Dennis exclaimed. He stares at Edgar, his face stiffens, it was as if Dennis’s an angered beast, ready to exact his revenge. Edgar nods, he waves Dennis to follow him. It was 22:00, an accident happened at that time that would be nicknamed “The Ganton Bloodbath” by locals. It marked the start of the life of a felon named Dennis “Danny” Sanchez, a man who would become one of the town’s most infamous criminal.

 

 

 

Saya Gospel selaku pemilik account UCP lontongsate1717 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Dennis_Sanchez) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Hi,

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