Treshawn Mchammer [Newbieuser]

[Out Leader]

Character: Brennan Wolfeschlegelstainhausen

Story:

 

Treshawn Mchammer. My closest friends call me Addy,But you can call meTreshawn 
I was born in Italy. My father was a laborer, and my mother stayed home with me and my brother, Ambrogio.
Times were hard, often times we did not eat. Other times we did not eat for lengths of time.
My father always told me to get through it and to be strong And that is what I did.The same could not be said for Ambrogio. 
He could not take the harsh way we lived, the way we were forced to live. And eventually, he gave up.

Hours upon hours I spent. Loading crates onto ships, anything that needed to be done.After he passed away, I went to work with my father.
Often I would return home when there was food, and be too exhausted to eat. So my mother kept the same meal for me the next day.
Years passed by, and as they passed my mother and father grew old.
On their passing, I packed up every dime I had, every article of clothing that was mine, and anything in my possession, and I boarded a ship.
It seemed as though I'd been on that ship for years Yet finally, one day, the horn blew loudly, waking me up.


I stood from where I slept, and heard the hoarse cry of the captain,"San Fiero docks. 's Far as I go, then it's back, back, back!"
I decided to get off of the ship here.
I got in with a local gang at first. Made me feel secure, made me feel like I had some people who would have my back when things got down and dirty.
I was wrong.This bunch wanted me as their scapegoat, and nothing more.

We had it all planned out. The Bank of San Fiero. We weren't many, but we were armed to the teeth. Anything we could get our hands on, we had.
We were going to do this. I was instructed to wait outside, making sure no police came.
A few minutes later the alarm rang out loudly, and out came the gang members.
They scattered. My limited knowledge of San Fierro made it hard for me to run anywhere. The cops caught up, and I went straight into SFPD custody.
So much for 'brothas.'


I was charged, and spent the next five years of my life in prison. I decided not to take this anymore.
When I got out, things were gonna change. I would make them change.
December 5th, 1981, I was released from prison. 
I was hardened now. I had grown, not only mentally, but physically.
I was no longer tall and lanky, but brutish looking. Only a few glances were pointed at me as I walked the streets of San Fiero, yet I could see it in their eyes. Fear.
I walked the streets out of San Fiero, and into the mountains. There I met a man, he offered me a ride. Suprised by this offer, I simply nodded and got in. HE drove me all the way to Los Santos.

Los Santos, now THIS was a city for me. It was big, many people lived here. And what's-more, San Fierro was far, far away. Out of sight, and eventually, out of mind.
I decided this is where I'd make it. If not here, nowhere.
And Los Santos is where I stayed, and it's where I intend on being buried,
But not too soon...

 

 

 

Saya Out Leader selaku pemilik account UCP Biawak331 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Brennan Wolfeschlegelsteinhausen) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited February 15, 2019 by Out Leader

[Kyusukey]



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To Mr/Ms laugh,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Tolong tinjau kembali, yang kamu buat ini bukan cerita. Perhatikan ketentuan paragraf, tanda baca, dan sebagainya. Buatlah, layaknya cerita-cerita lainnya.

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

HoA Kyusukey,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.



[Out Leader]

Edited

 

[$Rishad_McCortez$]

Reminder @Kyusukey !!

[Kyusukey]

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To Mr/Ms laugh,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. And, your character story will be moved and activated immidiately in  24 hours, if in 24 hours you still cannot access paycheck feature, please do contact one of JG:RP Staff in the game for further action.

Sincerely,

HoA Kyusukey,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.

[Kyusukey]

Hi,

Saya telah mereview character story kamu dan menemukan bahwa story kamu sudah memenuhi kriteria yang kami berikan. Dengan itu kami telah ACCEPT character story yang kamu buat. Mohon ikuti panduan di bawah ini untuk mengaktifkan character story kamu: