Simon_Resendez [Pricaro]

[QiuQiu]

Character: Simon Resendez

Origin: Mexican

Story:

        Simon Resendez is from Cijuana, Mexico. He's one of the illegal immigrants that moved to Los Santos.
Initially, Simon Resendez just wanted to get a normal life in his new town. But, his faith says the other.
Simon is lived around El Corona because he met another Hispanic people around there. El Corona provides
anything to him like food, friends, shelter, and much more. Day by day, he's starting to hanging with the other
until he realizes that El Corona is the biggest place of a Hispanic gang in Los Santos that called "Surenos".
        His friends called him Roxy, a usual street name. Roxy started to make one chaos and the other chaos.
Robbery, illegal transaction, brawl, until murders. He is already accustomed to being a gangster there.
One day he's ragged up by Blanc, one of the elders on El Corona. He keeps rolling until Surenos got a problem with 
government. Elder in Surenos gets caught for many pieces of evidence. The man around El Corona from Surenos that called Soldados
Declare a big war with the government after their elder gets caught and killed. Simon knew that soon or later his 
families will be taken down by the goverment. 21 Wednesday 2015, police start to take some action. 
His friends are killed that day. Simon can run away from El Corona back to his home, Tijuana.
        New life, after 10 years passed away he already forgets about that incident. He's married with 
a Hispanic girl there, and have a son. But, he got another problem with mafia in Tijuana. He asked his 
son to get away from there, he told his son that named Alejandro Jose to move to Los Santos, of course
as an illegal immigrant. 5 years later his son called him, the situation in Los Santos is safe.
So, Simon moved back to his sweet town, Los Santos.

 

 

Saya QiuQiu selaku pemilik account UCP Pricaro bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Simon Resendez) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

[$Rishad_McCortez$]



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To Mr. Simon,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Tolong pisahkan paragrafnya menjadi 3 dan diberikan enter
2. Gunakan bahasa Indonesia yang benar jika tidak bisa menggunakan bahasa Inggris yang benar

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper Rishad_McCortez,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.

[QiuQiu]

1 hour ago, rishad_mcortez said:



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To Mr. Simon,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Tolong pisahkan paragrafnya menjadi 3 dan diberikan enter
2. Gunakan bahasa Indonesia yang benar jika tidak bisa menggunakan bahasa Inggris yang benar

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper Rishad_McCortez,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.

Beberapa grammar sudah dibetulkan dan saya memisahkan paragraf bukan dengan enter melainkan dengan spasi kedalam.

Terima kasih sudah menganjurkan untuk memakai bahasa Indonesia.

[$Rishad_McCortez$]

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To Mr. Simon,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. And, your character story will be moved and activated immidiately in  24 hours, if in 24 hours you still cannot access paycheck feature, please do contact one of JG:RP Staff in the game for further action.

Sincerely,

Helper Rishad_McCortez,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.

 

[$Rishad_McCortez$]

Hi,

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