Early_Earl [Koenkun]

[David_Umbracato]

Character Name: Early_Earl

Origin: United Kingdom of Great Britain

Story:

 

 

Early Earl was born on the 6th of May 1995, in his homeland - Great Britain. Ever since Early was born, his parents always raise him with care and love, resulting in him being a wise and loving characteristics person. Not only he was raised by such wonderful parents, but he was also a living descendant to an Anglo-Saxon noble. Early spent most of his early life studying the history of ancient tribes from the 5th century, with an intention to keep all records of it preserved as it is.

 

Throughout his life, Early was able to maintain his living conditions for the better. Succeeding to attend the University of Oxford at the age of 17 was truly a miracle for him, but sadly he had to leave on the 5th semester due to a traffic collision; he and several drivers were involved thankfully no one loses their lives. Henceforth, Early willingly leave the University to avoid a much bigger outcome or consequences. Even so, he managed to learn a lot of important things from the 5 semesters he attended. Till now, It is still Early's nature to learn more, after he left the University he tried to seek a way out from his misfortune. Briefly, in a short period of time - he determined to focus on a subject that he abandoned before.

 

Early's mid-20s has arrived - in that short time, he was able to fulfil the determination he has made. He succeeds to become a historian in such age. Early's historian career had it comes and goes times - even though he manages to endure it so far, it is only a matter of time before he had to leave the office open-handedly.

 

On the day of Early's 6th month of service, it is unfortunate that he had to hand over an involuntary resignation paper owing to the fact of a failed partnership between his and two other parties.

Terrified of making the same mistake, he decided to leave all of his work behind and untouched. Depressed of what he has experienced, Early once again had the bitter taste of failure.

 

Searching for resolve in his current state; resulting in him to travel from time to time.
Early's first destination was pointed out by his former colleague, which leads to Los Santos. Although he hesitates at first, shortly after he made up his mind. 

 

December 27, 2018 - Early's arrival and also his new chapter of life is now guaranteed. In preparation for his arrival at the Los Santos International Airport, he planned out to only stay in Los Santos for at least until he is in his late-20s. Adapting in such environment as of Los Santos will truly be a challenge for him, meeting head to head with its citizens gives him anxiety from time to time. However, since this is a new chapter of his, he decided to just flow without planning much from the very start. Despite the anxiety that gives him off, he is looking forward to the future that awaits him.
 

 

 

Saya Koen selaku pemilik account UCP Koenkun bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Early_Earl) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited January 2, 2019 by David_Umbracato
Edited

[$chronis$]

2 hours ago, Koen said:

Early spent most of his early life studying the history of ancient tribes from the 5th century, with an intention to keep the history running. 

 

Throughout his life, Early was able to befriend with his surroundings.

 

even after he left the University he tried to seek another alternative

 

Early's historian career had it comes and goes paces - but fortunately, he was able to endure its paces

 

There are better wording for these highlighted words.

 

2 hours ago, Koen said:

Succeeding to attend the University of Oxford at the age of 17 was truly a miracle for him, but sadly he had to leave on the 5th semester due to his condition.

 

Explain his condition.

 

3 hours ago, Koen said:

On the day of Early's 6th month of service. It is unfortunate, that he had to hand over an involuntary resignation paper owing to the fact of a failed partnership between his and two other parties. 

 

Terrified of making the same mistake, he decided to leave all the work behind - untouched. Depressed of what he became, a failure.

 

Fix the punctuation placement.

 

Note :

• Tie the story with his arrival to Los Santos.

[David_Umbracato]

Thank you for your reply,

 

Edited.

[$chronis$]

On 12/27/2018 at 9:02 PM, Koen said:

On the day of Early's 6th month of service. It is unfortunate, that he had to hand over an involuntary resignation paper owing to the fact of a failed partnership between his and two other parties. Terrified of making the same mistake, he decided to leave all the work behind - untouched. Depressed of what he became, a failure. Early once again, didn't have any purpose to life.

Ini pengunaan tanda bacanya masih banyak yang salah, belom diubah apa-apa.

[David_Umbracato]

2 hours ago, chronis said:

Ini pengunaan tanda bacanya masih banyak yang salah, belom diubah apa-apa.

 

Ohh iya, maaf tadi kelupaan.

 

Edited.

[$chronis$]

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