Dylan Parkel [gading25]

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Character: Dylan Parkel

Story:

    Dylan Parkel was born in Los Santos on August 17, 2002. He lived with his brother Terrell Pearson at Jefferson because his parents had died. He was born to a poor family. One day he walked around Ganton and he meet his brother's friend Taymore Weathers and told him about the fate of his family, after which Taymore offered a job to kill people, but he was afraid to do his job.

 

    The next day he accepted a job offer from Taymore and Taymore gave him a gun, Taymore gave the person the characteristics and he would do the work that night, Taymore said, "You have to be careful in doing work, keep calm and that person is around Idlewood" and he said "Well, I will remember your words", then he went to Jefferson to prepare himself.

At 24.00, he walked to Idlewood to do his job of killing someone, not long after he found his target, he sought a position to shoot, he managed to shoot the target and then he ran to the house to swear an oath.

 

    The next day he walked to Ganton to meet Taymore, and Taymore gave some money, then he returned to Jefferson and he rested on the East Los Santos basketball court. After a few minutes later he continued his journey home when he saw the police walking towards him, he tried to run from the police and the police shoot him in the leg and he was in pain,
after that he was taken to the hospital to check the condition of his legs, after which he was taken to prison with the charges of murdering. Five years later he was released from prison and called Taymore to pick him up. He waited for Taymore for 3 minutes and Taymore arrived at SAPD Headquarters, Taymore invited him to relax around the ganton and finally he had many friends in ganton.

 

 

Saya sTacKs  selaku pemilik account UCP gading25  bersedia jika Character saya yang di sebut atas  (Dylan_Parkel) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. 

 

 

 

 

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To Mr/Ms Parkel / sTacKs,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Quote

   with charges murdering

   This sentence is about to missed something along my knowledge. It should be with: "With the charges of murdering" or something else. Correct me if I am wrong too.

2. Make every paragraph indented to fill the requirements of write a story.

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Javanicus66,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.



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Hi,

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