pending Lester_Dockey [RaffiHD]

[$Muff1n$]

Lester Dockey

---

 

 

Lester Dockey

Living in a harsh environment, Lester Dockey trying to keep alive with his little brother from the neighbourhood. Gunshots every day and night terrify both Lester and his brother, working on a little restaurant his late father left to him and barely making enough for them both as they keep getting asked for money and free foods by the gangster as they live nearby the gangster. One day Lester breaks from the hard day sitting on the chair infront of his house, he spots his little brother coming back from the basket ball court getting third partied by the gang war. Lester's brother was shot and died on spot after the incident of the gang war, Lester could'nt hold the tear as he lost his one and only brother and he had nobody else.

 

Few weeks passed by after his little brother funeral, Lester barely opens his restaurant, get drunks every night on the bar near his house. One night Lester decides to get a revenge on one of the gang members that shot his little brother, he looks after streets arm dealers and bought a gun to be a protection if something  isn't goes as he plans. The next day Lester saw the killer walking alone heading home, Lester instantly decide to break earlier to the house through the backdoor.

 

Lester is waiting on the kitchen crouching and waits until the killer enter the house. The time has come as Lester strikes the killer the second he enters the house and knock the killer. Lester brought the killer to the room and turns off all the light and by the time this killer woke up, Lester asks a couple question and the answer shocks Lester as the killer said hes doing it on purpose because Lester's little brother is one of the favourite basketball player in the school and it makes Lester in disbelief hearing the answer. Lester shots the killer right on the head and left the house dark, since that day Lester never seen around the environment and none knows where he go.

 

 

---

 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun

URL Namechange:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/340358-cn-ignacio-alcaraz-to-lester-dockey-raffihd/

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
RaffiHD

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

Muff1n

---

 

Saya Muff1n selaku pemilik account UCP RaffiHD bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Lester Dockey) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

[revanzaputra]

Review.

[revanzaputra]

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
   Spoiler

   

    

Review.