Tony_Derazio Posted March 12 Posted March 12 UCP Name: TonyDerazio Old Character: Salvator_Bonpensiero Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/371777-salvator_bonpensiero-tonyderazio/#comment-3784004 New Character: Anthony_Caprano Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: United States of America Reason for name change request: Terkena famous name saat pembuatan character story. Screenshots of OOC Jail, '/myid', and '/mp': Bukti OOC Jail /myid /mp CK Story: Spoiler Salvatore Bopensiero is a New Jersey mob affiliate living in exile in San Andreas, specifically in Los Santos. He is tasked with overseeing drug distribution there while observing the interests of his New Jersey crew, who intend to expand their business operations into the city. Sal temporarily resides in a safehouse prepared by his captain, who has done him a favor by isolating him from the New York crew after Sal was involved in the murder of a made man from the New York crew over a woman he had fallen in love with. The arrangement keeps him out of sight while still allowing him to work for the family. One day, while carrying out his usual duties as the New Jersey crew’s representative in Los Santos, Sal receives an unexpected call from back home. Salvator is told to use a public payphone in order to avoid the Feds intercepting the call. He installs a voice encryption device as an additional safety measure, demonstrating both his intelligence and his paranoia. During the call, Sal is assigned to retrieve a drug package from a remote area of the jungle. The captain informs him that someone else will assist with the retrieval, but he won't reveal who that person is. Sal is immediately suspicious of this secrecy, as he doesn't know who he'll be meeting or who owns the package. Sal chooses to follow the order despite his reservations. Despite his reservations, Sal decides to carry out the order. As an old-school man who respects the chain of command and out of gratitude for the protection his captain previously provided. Eventually, Sal shows up at the agreed-upon spot to retrieve the package. He discovers nothing but emptiness when he enters the deserted barn. There is no sign of the package or the enigmatic contact he was instructed to meet, and the building is quiet and empty. Abruptly, a man in a mask appears and immediately shoots him. The gunman is a hitman that the New York crew sent to exact revenge on Sal for killing their former made guy. Sal falls to the ground, bleeding profusely from his wounds as he gradually loses consciousness. He passes away by himself in the barren silence of the forest. In the end, the truth becomes clear: his own captain had betrayed him, handing him over to the New York crew to settle old scores and pay for Sal’s past mistakes. CK Screenshots: Bukti
Nixons Posted March 12 Posted March 12 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
Tony_Derazio Posted March 12 Author Posted March 12 38 minutes ago, Nixons said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? 1. Iya. 2. Iya. 3. Iya. 4. Balas dendam. 5. Iya.
Nixons Posted March 13 Posted March 13 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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