filthykikz [CN] Devoreaux Peeps to Traynesha Ruthbless (Aeschylus)

[Cely Shelby]

UCP Name: Aeschylus

Old Character: Devoreaux Peeps

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/348814-devoreaux_peeps-aeschylus/#comment-3529992

 

 

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New Character: Traynesha Ruthbless

Gender: Perempuan (Female)

Origin: United State of America.

 

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Reason for name change request:

ingin ganti usia dan gender

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

Bukti

 

OOC JAIL

Spoiler

/myid

Spoiler

/mp

Spoiler

 

 

 

CK Story:

Spoiler

Once upon a time there was a young man named Devoreaux Peeps he was a young man who was quite naughty in a complex, he liked to show off his wealth and liked to steal, because his money was the result of stealing, then when Devo woke up in the morning he took a shower and had breakfast for a while who became unemployed at home, he had an idea to steal in a fairly rich house. And Devo will broadcast his plan the following night. When at night Devo headed to the house he wanted to steal he brought his tools in the trunk of his car, not long after, Devo took his tools, Devo started to enter his house with the front door, which was quiet and there was no one then Devo looked for valuables in the house to sell for a high price then got a gold that could be sold for a high price of up to $ 50,000 then Devo ran away from the place of the theft and returned to his own house,

Devo did not expect he could find valuable gold he kept it under his mattress, Devo could sleep soundly all night. then morning came Devo wanted to sell his gold to his friend
Jayquan he likes to collect quite expensive gold then Devo SMS and met at a place that had been promised by Jayquan, when he arrived at a restaurant Devo took out an item which was a gold bar and gave it to Jayquan then Devo offered a price of $50,000 for one bar Devo had 4 gold bars, then Jayquan asked to negotiate at $150,000 for 4 gold bars

And Devo agreed with that price. when he went home Devo kept all his money in a bag and Devo planned to steal again at his friend's house Jayquan, Devo planned to steal in the afternoon Devo intended to steal a Sultan car owned by Jayquan. Upon arriving at the location, Devo first checked the situation and saw that there was no one at home, but Jayquan saw from the window of his house, then Devo managed to steal his car and then run away. When he ran away, Devo was followed from behind by a motorbike which turned out to be Jayquan who had been following him, then Jayquan blocked Devo and told Devo to get out of the car, then Jayquan shot Devo brutally.

 

CK Screenshots:

Bukti

 

 

 

[FilthyKikz]

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

[Cely Shelby]

1.Sudah

2.Sudah

3.Sudah

4.berniat untuk mencuri kendaraan teman sendiri.tetapi malah terciduk saat melakukan mencuri

5.Sudah

[FilthyKikz]

Sebelum melanjutkan ada beberapa pertanyaan dan revisi yang perlu dilakukan :

1. Screenshot /mp dan /myid kamu kebalik, tolong diperbaiki
2. Silahkan ganti screenshot OOC jail dengan jail yang ada di /mywarns kamu
3. Perbaiki bagian SSRP CK kamu, tidak perlu menambahkan spoiler lagi
4. Sebelum melakukan CK, apakah karaktermu sudah bebas dari tanggungan IC? (Warrant / buronan SAPD)

[Cely Shelby]

1.Sudah direvisi

2. Sudah direvisi

3. Sudah direvisi

4.Sudah 

@FilthyKikz done revisi mas

[FilthyKikz]

Accepted, please wait until A1+ processes your changename.

[Farelalhasby]

review

[Farelalhasby]

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.