Mauris Posted June 16, 2025 Posted June 16, 2025 (edited) https://i.postimg.cc/JnZMMp00/44374acb-4d6a-48b7-8eea-c480bbfc295e.jpg Mauris Coolins was born on 13th March 2002 to a simple family who were living in the West Virginia area. His father, James Coolins, was a trader who moved around to sell and his income was not fixed while his mother, Elena Coolins, was a housewife. Their life was so hard that they couldn't even afford milk or basic needs for Mauris when he was a kid. In spite of the fact that his father sold goods every day, rarely the goods were sold and the farm of his mother was often also without harvest. When Mauris was 10 years old, he was close to quitting school because there was no money, but his parents found the money by borrowing from their neighbors so his schooling was continued because of the money that the neighbors lent to him. When Mauris was 15, his parents' condition was no good. Mauris decided to take over his father's job as a street vendor and went selling from morning until night to help his family's economy. One day, his effort paid off, his goods were sold well, and he could give that money to his parents. Their happiness at that time was priceless. However, that happiness did not last long. One afternoon, while Mauris was selling, a friend of his came with bad news that his parents had died because their condition was worse. Mauris ran home, leaving his goods, and cried when he got there. He thought that he was a failure because he had not yet made his parents happy. The death of his parents was the reason mauris changed his life. At the age of 23, he decided to move to Los Santos, determined to find an honest job with a decent salary. At first, life in the big city was very strange and made him almost desperate. A friend of his offered him a quick way to get money with illegal work, mauris was interested in the job and accepted it. After one month of work, Mauris got whatever he wanted. His salary was enough to meet his needs, and he was grateful to be able to do so. The job was not only providing him with a decent life, but also a new hope. For Mauris, it was the beginning of his promise to live a better life and at the same time a last homage to his deceased parents. He was determined never to leave this job because this is where he found the way to build a better future. Edited June 16, 2025 by Mauris
Joee Posted June 16, 2025 Posted June 16, 2025 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Mauris Posted June 16, 2025 Author Posted June 16, 2025 2 minutes ago, Joee said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents 1. ya 2. kurang dari 1 bulan 3. buat baru 4. tidak 5. tidak 6. Di rumah
Joee Posted June 16, 2025 Posted June 16, 2025 Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan JUJUR: Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya! Apakah kamu menggunakan AI dalam membuat karakter story ini? Silahkan perbaiki kesalahan berikut: Silahkan hapus angka yang tidak penting di kiri paragraf teks cerita karakter kamu. @Mauris
Mauris Posted June 16, 2025 Author Posted June 16, 2025 5 minutes ago, Joee said: Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan JUJUR: Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya! Apakah kamu menggunakan AI dalam membuat karakter story ini? Silahkan perbaiki kesalahan berikut: Silahkan hapus angka yang tidak penting di kiri paragraf teks cerita karakter kamu. @Mauris 1. cuma 1 mauriscollins 2. Tidak.
Joee Posted June 16, 2025 Posted June 16, 2025 Ceritakan sedikit bagaiman proses kamu membuat cerita karakter ini mulai dari referensi dari mana dan item yang kamu gunakan, baik itu google dan sebagainya.
Mauris Posted June 16, 2025 Author Posted June 16, 2025 Just now, Joee said: Ceritakan sedikit bagaiman proses kamu membuat cerita karakter ini mulai dari referensi dari mana dan item yang kamu gunakan, baik itu google dan sebagainya. Ini saya ngetiknya pake bahas indonesia cuma saya translatekan ke inggirs. Jadi ceritanya itu mauris lahir dari keluarga kurang mampu dan tinggal di daerah kecil bernama west virginia terus singkat cerita kedua orang tua mauris meninggal lalu mauris merantau berharap mendapatkan gaji yang lumaya buat kehidupan sehari hari tapi mauris malah di tawari sama temannya pekerjaan yang tidak halal dan ilegal mauris tertarik pekerjaan itu sampai sekarang. Referensinya dari pikiran saya sendiri saat membuat character story ini.
Joee Posted June 17, 2025 Posted June 17, 2025 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Mauris, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Joee JG:RP Helper Team
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