$Teddybear$ Posted April 5, 2025 Posted April 5, 2025 UCP Name: Rifanza_Tantu Old Character: Diego Tormenta Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/337887-diego_tormenta-rifanza_tantu/#comment-3404877 New Character: Finn Ashford Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: England Reason for name change request: Ingin mengubah alur roleplay Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC Jail: Spoiler /MP: Spoiler /MYID: Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler Diego Tormenta is the youngest of two siblings, he works odd jobs but has a fairly large income from his work, his life is simple, living his days as a cruiser motorcycle enthusiast in Mexico who always travels alone on the streets. One day the Tormenta family was faced with difficult times, Diego Tormenta's older brother, Bartolomeo Tormenta, a reliable, talented, and experienced military man, was assigned to a secret mission to spy on, dig, and find information about one of the biggest mafias in Mexico, at that time many military members fell but Bartolomeo Tormenta was one of those who survived and still carried out the mission, until finally Bartolomeo Tormenta was reported to have died, disappeared, and failed the secret mission. Diego Tormenta, a younger brother who did not want his brother to die, he looked for information about Bartolomeo Tormenta around the military area, even to Bartolomeo Tormenta's colleagues, the military knew that Diego Tormenta was Bartolomeo Tormenta's younger brother. Diego Tormenta received information from one of Bartolomeo Tormenta's friends who had retired from the military, precisely on the secret mission that his brother was fine but was being targeted by the Mexican mafia because he had dug up information about them, Bartolomeo Tormenta had actually left the military after the secret mission and then moved to Los Santos to isolate and escape from the threat of the Mexican mafia. Diego Tormenta who had received the crucial information, immediately went to the city of Los Santos to look for his brother. Upon arriving in Los Santos, Diego Tormenta searched for his brother for 2 weeks and finally met. Both of them looked fine but Bartolomeo Tormenta was still under threat from the Mexican mafia. One day, the mafia launched a movement to find Bartolomeo Tormenta, the mafia knew Tormenta's family tree and Diego Tormenta as his younger brother, the mafia knew their current location because they had good intelligence. It was unfortunate that when Diego was having a relaxing day in Los Santos he had to be kidnapped by the mafia to ask about Bartolomeo Tormenta's whereabouts. Diego Tormenta was tortured badly but he refused to tell his brother's whereabouts firmly, unfortunately Diego's harsh and withholding behavior resulted in him being tortured, beaten, and shot several times because he was helpless over his condition by the Mexican mafia. CK Screenshots: Bukti
Nixons Posted April 5, 2025 Posted April 5, 2025 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$Teddybear$ Posted April 5, 2025 Author Posted April 5, 2025 4 minutes ago, Nixons said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. Sudah 2. Sudah 3. Sudah 4. Pembunuhan terorganisir mafia untuk mencari informasi 5. Sudah
Nixons Posted April 5, 2025 Posted April 5, 2025 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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