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[CN] Bartolomeo Tormenta to Jaylen Kyree (bibirmonyong)


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UCP Name: bibirmonyong

Old Character: Bartolomeo Tormenta

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Jaylen Kyree

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: USA

 


Reason for name change request:

Mencoba roleplay baru

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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OOC Jail

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CK Story:

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     Bartolomeo Tormenta is a man who works as a drug dealer in the city of Los Santos. One day when he was making a transaction with a customer, a man accidentally saw his action and tried to run away. Bartolomeo didn't stay silent, he didn't want to go to prison so he chased the man until he reached a dead end. Bartolomeo took out a gun from under his shirt and shot the man. The man died on the spot. Bartolomeo didn't know that the person he killed was the father of his friend, Ace. Ace is Bartolomeo's friend since childhood and they work together as drug dealers.
      One night Bartolomeo met Ace and Ace told him what happened to his father. Bartolomeo was quite shocked and tried to calm Ace down. Ace, who is full of revenge, asks Bartolomeo to help him find out who killed his father. Bartolomeo also agreed. A week after that, Ace never appeared before Bartolomeo again. Bartolomeo tried to find out information about Ace but he didn't get anything. Bartolomeo was desperate and he tried to forget his friend and focus on his work. Behind it all, Ace already knows the culprit and he plans to take revenge.
     A month later, Bartolomeo woke up in the morning because he was hungry. He then immediately went to a nearby restaurant to buy food. After he ordered food, he immediately came out and approached his car. When he wanted to get into his car, his cell phone suddenly rang. Bartolomeo took his cellphone and was surprised to see that the caller was Ace. Bartolomeo picked up the telephone and Ace without further ado asked Bartolomeo to pick him up from the Blueberry parking area. Bartolomeo immediately went to that location and was quite happy to see Ace finally return. Ace asked Bartolomeo to take him to the empty building that had once been their hiding place from the police. When he got there, Ace asked Bartolomeo to come in. Bartolomeo just kept quiet and wondered in his mind what was going on. Ace took out his gun and immediately pointed Bartolomeo at gunpoint. Bartolomeo was suddenly shocked and confused. Ace told him to raise his hands. Bartolomeo asked what all this meant and Ace explained everything. Bartolomeo begged for forgiveness from Ace because he did not know that the person he killed was Ace's father. Ace didn't care anymore and immediately shot Bartolomeo in the head.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted
3 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. sudah

2. sudah

3. sudah

4. Terbunuh karna balas dendam temannya.

5. sudah

 

  • $NALUZI$ changed the title to [CN] Bartolomeo Tormenta to Jaylen Kyree (bibirmonyong)
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Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.

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