$NALUZI$ Posted January 12, 2025 Posted January 12, 2025 Bartolomeo Tormenta Bartolomeo Tormenta Vera is a Mexican man who was born on May 27 1995 in Mexico City. Bartolomeo comes from a poor family. His father was a small-time workshop entrepreneur and his mother did not work. Bartolomeo always helped his father work in the workshop after school, so he knew quite a lot about machines. Bartolomeo is not the only child. He has a younger brother named Diego Tormenta. At the age of eighteen Bartolomeo graduated from school and tried to achieve his dream of becoming an army soldier. He took part in the selection and he passed all types of tests. Knowing this, his parents were very proud to have a child who would be successful. During his time in the Army, Bartolomeo was quite a great person. He achieved the rank of Sergeanto Primero within seven years due to his bravery and contribution to some missions. One day, he received a mission to investigate a cartel that had been operating for a long time in drug and weapons trafficking in Mexico City. This was quickly heard by the cartel leaders. The cartel also deliberately met Bartolomeo secretly when he was not on duty. The cartel offered cooperation in exchange for a lot of money compared to his salary during his time as a soldier. Bartolomeo was silent and asked for time to think about this. The cartel gives Bartolomeo one day to think of an answer. The next day they met at the same place and Bartolomeo agreed to this. He was assigned to provide information and also provide access for them to smuggle drugs and weapons across the border. This collaboration continued for 6 months, until the army found an audio recording of a conversation between Bartolomeo and Cartel members from a cellphone. Bartolomeo was arrested and tried by a military court. He was given the choice to cooperate with the Government to catch the Cartel or be imprisoned for life. Bartolomeo chose to cooperate with the government. He revealed all the information he knew about the cartel and not long after that. Military soldiers succeeded in finding the Cartel headquarters and arrested all the cartel members. Bartolomeo was finally released from punishment but he had to be expelled from the army and all the money he got from the cartel was confiscated by the government. Bartolomeo's life turns drastically. Every night he just sat at the bar and got drunk. He never even contacted his parents or younger brother again. He was quite depressed with everything that happened to him. Bartolomeo was at his wits' end, he felt that he had to leave this city because no one else accepted him to work. On his 29th birthday, he decided to leave for Los Santos, leaving the city where he was born and forgetting his parents and younger brother. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/336148-cn-whalberg-khazanski-to-bartolomeo-tormenta-bibirmonyong/ Account UCP yang saya miliki: bibirmonyong Account Forum yang saya miliki: NALUZI Saya NALUZI selaku pemilik account UCP bibirmonyong bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Bartolomeo Tormenta) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
FilthyKikz Posted January 12, 2025 Posted January 12, 2025 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$NALUZI$ Posted January 12, 2025 Author Posted January 12, 2025 1. Tidak 2. 1 tahun lebih 3. Namechange 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di rumah
FilthyKikz Posted January 14, 2025 Posted January 14, 2025 Sebelum melanjutkan ada beberapa revisi dan pertanyaan : On 12/1/2025 at 18.16, NALUZI said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Edit lalu isi bagian ini dengan Account UCP dan Account Forum yang kamu miliki! Apakah Character Story milikmu sudah 300 kata? Jika belum, buat sampai 300 kata lebih dan pisahkan jadi 3 paragraf. Jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu memiliki Forum lain selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Jika ada sebutkan! Jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu memiliki UCP lain selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Jika ada sebutkan! Jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu menggunakan AI untuk membuat Character Story ini?
$NALUZI$ Posted January 14, 2025 Author Posted January 14, 2025 58 minutes ago, FilthyKikz said: Sebelum melanjutkan ada beberapa revisi dan pertanyaan : Edit lalu isi bagian ini dengan Account UCP dan Account Forum yang kamu miliki! Apakah Character Story milikmu sudah 300 kata? Jika belum, buat sampai 300 kata lebih dan pisahkan jadi 3 paragraf. Jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu memiliki Forum lain selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Jika ada sebutkan! Jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu memiliki UCP lain selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Jika ada sebutkan! Jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu menggunakan AI untuk membuat Character Story ini? 1. Sudah 2. Sudah 3. Tidak 4. tidak 5. tidak
FilthyKikz Posted January 15, 2025 Posted January 15, 2025 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @NALUZI, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @FilthyKikz JG:RP Helper Team
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