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Jesus_Montana


 

 

 

A 19-year-old young man who lives in a tough neighborhood. He is Jesus Montana, a boy who grew up and born in a small town in Las Colinas. He spent his time playing with the naughty children who lived there. One day, Jesus had just returned home to find that his mother had died, His mother was lying limp in front of the television with a knife still stuck in her left chest, suddenly Jesus was very shocked by this incident, he ran here and there looking for his father. Who had just run away from home? When Jesus wanted to check on his mother's condition, he was shocked when the knife used by the perpetrator had a symbol engraved on it belonging to one of the gangsters in the area.

 

It turns out that his mother was killed by his father. His father was a gangster and he served as a drug dealer in that place. One day, his mother, who was in debt here and there, wanted to try drugs from the gangster to calm her mind, then without realizing it, his mother had become a drug addict who always bought drugs from the gangster. But because his mother's debts are increasing and she hasn't paid the drug money she ordered from the gangster boss for 2 months. Then the gangster boss ordered one of his men to kill Jesus's mother, and that person was Jesus's father. 5 years after that, when Jesus was 24 years old, he continued his father's job as a drug dealer in a small town.

 

Jesus' goal in becoming a drug dealer was to become a spy and destroy the gangster group from within. Jesus, who had prepared everything carefully, then took his first action by killing his colleague named Marco, while they were carrying out their duties to deliver an order from one of the clients, suddenly Jesus shot Marco with 3 shots hitting Marco in the chest and 2 shots in the head. Marco. A week after that, Jesus made a plan to kill two of the gangster boss's confidants with his own hands, and then Jesus recruited several of the gangster boss's men into his group to finish off the greedy gangster boss together.

 

After all of Jesus's plans went smoothly, he surrendered himself to the police and Jesus was imprisoned for 5 years. 5 years after the incident, Jesus was released on parole and he started a new life in Los Santos City and traveling to other big cities.

 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: Tidak (kemarin sudah buat tapi denied)

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki: yolom1

Account Forum yang saya miliki: yolom1

 


 

Saya yolom1 selaku pemilik account UCP yolom1 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jesus_Montana) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
    Spoiler

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  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah)
Posted
On 12/30/2024 at 2:04 PM, Joee said:

Tolong jawab jujur, sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya.

hanya ucp yolom1 saja min ucp saya

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email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @yolom1,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Joee
JG:RP Helper Team

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