nixons [CN] Zylvathra Zuentdrozhra to Laster Kimbrough (Dravenox)

[Phantasy]

UCP Name: Dravenox

Old Character: Zylvathra Zuentdrozhra

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/297584-zylvathra_zuentdrozhra-dravenox/#comment-2917505

 

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New Character: Laster Kimbrough

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: Canada

 

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Reason for name change request:

Saya ingin mengubah alur storyline yang sudah hanya begitu-begitu saja, saya tidak dapat menemukan character development yang bagus untuk char ini. Saya juga ingin merefresh alur roleplay dan bermain saya di character baru ini. Selain itu, saya rasa sudah saatnya saya beroleplay sebagai laki-laki karena akan lebih nyaman secara IC dan OOC.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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'/myid' dan '/mp'

 

 

OOC Jail

 

 

 

CK Story:

Spoiler

Zylvathra Zuentdrozhra was a former doctor at Los Santos, but she had to quit due to health reasons and old age. After leaving her life as a doctor, she spends time playing with her grandchildren and family in her home country of South Africa. She felt that it was a tough choice, but it was also the best choice for her. However, a few years later, her family was in disarray and fell into poverty. This sudden poverty required all of her family members to work, from the young to the old, including Zylvathra. Seeing this situation, Zylvathra had no choice but to return to Los Santos, which is arguably not a safe city. Zylvathra traveled to Los Santos by plane, and when she arrived, she was immediately greeted by her friend, Willian King. Willian welcomed Zylva's arrival, after which he unceremoniously brought Zylva to his house for a little chit-chat. Zylvathra told him all her troubles, Willian listened well. Then, Willian had the idea to give Zylva a job as a truck driver delivering crates. Zylvathra had no other choice, she agreed with Willian's idea. Zylva worked as a truck driver to deliver crates from one place to another, it was tiring but it was the best choice.

One day, she started working as usual. However, for some reason that day she felt restless. However, Zylva ignored these feelings and continued to work. Moreover, she saw many police car passing by, so she shouldn't have anything to worry about. However, it turned out that there was a dangerous situation where an evil gang was patrolling around Blueberry. She got the info from the mechanic, and her friend who she met nearby. How kind of her friends whom she met named William and Calvin, gave Zylva a firearm discount voucher. Zylva was confused, but was forced by them for her own safety. Without realizing it, there was a group of people watching the conversation between the three of them. After that, the clueless Zylva went to Ammunation to redeem the discount voucher and purchase a firearm suitable for beginners. Once she felt safe, she continued her work to deliver the crates.

However, in the middle of the road he was stopped by someone in a red car. Inevitably, Zylva came out and obeyed the person's orders out of fear. That person accused Zylva, that Zylva was in cahoots with Calvin. Zylva was confused because she didn't know anything, but despite several explanations, the man continued to slander her and even hated and threatened her. Seeing this, Zylva immediately ran away with her Benson to find a safe place for her. However, the red car continued to follow her wherever she went. Finally, Zylvathra went to the center area of the mine to hide, but was still followed by the red car. Eventually, Zylva was spotted and they had a shootout. Unfortunately, Zylva was shot in the head. Yes, Zylva lost because of her lack of experience with guns. Zylvathra died on the spot, bleeding profusely. Zylvathra's killer fled the scene immediately. It was a sad end for an old mother who was just trying to make a living.

 

CK Screenshots:

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[Nixons]

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

[Phantasy]

14 minutes ago, Nixons said:

• Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
• Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
• Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
• Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
• Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

1. Sudah.

2. Sudah.

3. Sudah.

4. Dibunuh karena dituduh bersengkongkol dengan temannya yang merupakan lawan dari si pembunuh, dan dia melawan membuat suasana semakin panas.

5. Sudah.

[Phantasy]

Izin bump, 1×24 jam.

 

Bagaimana, min? @Nixons

[Nixons]

Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.Laster Kimbrough

[Matchalattee]

Review

[Matchalattee]

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.