$Piol13x$ Posted June 27, 2024 Posted June 27, 2024 Leonardo_Cavelazia Once upon a time, a man borned in 9 July 1994 in California, United States. The man named Leonardo Cavelazil, he is little brother in law of Lucrezia Cavelazila. He's son of Lucrezia's Mother as Lucrezia's dad is die in big gang war in Mexico. His Mother named Luna Cavelazila who was died right after she have a birth of Leonardo. Leonardo live in bad places in America, where he always got an discriminate and hate by his neighbour cause he is reason of his Mom's dead. Leonardo live without anyone else in family want to help him to teach him a lesson about this world, even he didn't know about his big brother in law, Lucrezia. All of his Family that he had in California hate him, again Because he is the reason Luna's dead. In one moment when he is 18, he meet a girl who like him and support him the best, even after Leonardo tell the truth about him and his mom, the girl still Loving Leonardo. The girl named Saki. Saki is a teenager from Indonesia who visit California in order following Student Exchange Program. At first Leonardo ignore of Saki's existence, but as soon he get close to Saki, Leonardo start to love her back. But a bad fate coming to both of them, Saki died because he trying to save Leonardo from get hit by a truck. Leonardo depressed for Saki's dead so he take Saki's body moving away to the city called Los Santos. Once he arrived at East Beach, he rent a car and bring Saki's body that he put in suitcase to Bayside. He bought one small house at bayside and then he put Saki's body inside of his small house. He working 24/7 without seeing the clock until, he meet Alejandro Calavezila, friend of Lucrezia. Alejandro Helps him to work and tell him how to maximizing his salary without working 24/7. Right after that, one thing he realized is, he has big brother in law, Lucrezia. he asked to Alejandro and tell about Lucrezia, but Leonardo wont to meet Lucrezia, because he's scary Lucrezia will kill him and he choose to never meet Alejandro again. Now a days, Leonardo doing an rob activity as his favorite things to do, but he doesn't forget about Saki. He always go to see Saki's dead body at Sunday 23:00. And then, the story of Leonardo just started. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Saya Piol13x selaku pemilik account UCP kheanoezz bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Leonardo_Cavelazia) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
FilthyKikz Posted June 27, 2024 Posted June 27, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi @Piol13x, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$Piol13x$ Posted June 27, 2024 Author Posted June 27, 2024 Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Tidak Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) 1 tahun lebih Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Buat baru Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Tidak Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Tidak Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) Di rumah @FilthyKikz
$Piol13x$ Posted June 30, 2024 Author Posted June 30, 2024 On 28/6/2024 at 16.06, zainsandi said: Cs ini akan saya take over apakah sudah di review?
zainsandi Posted July 1, 2024 Posted July 1, 2024 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Piol13x, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @zainsandi JG:RP Helper Team
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