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[CN] Aiden Harper to Simon Dipaolo (daigoardan53)


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UCP Name: daigoardan53

Old Character: Aiden Harper

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Simon Dipaolo

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United States of America

 


Reason for name change request:

Menyelesaikan lore karakter Aiden Harper, ingin beroleplay menggunakan nama baru, dan mempersiapkan keputusan cadangan yakni transfer menjadi full-time officer.

 

Screenshots of OOC Jail, '/myid' and '/mp':

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Screenshot /myid
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Screenshot /mp
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Screenshot OOC Jail
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CK Story:

Spoiler

Aiden Harper was a Assistant Chief of the San Andreas Police Department serves more than ten years. In his line of work Harper manages to revitalize his parents business that goes under several years ago after their passing, and Harper officially become the CEO of the McRalion's Expedition Inc. Harper achieved many things Harper can't even remember on attempting to be thriving in San Andreas and thinking that on June 12th 2024 is the right moment to submit his retiring letter.

Harper goes towards the Pershing Square station and borrows one of the computer to writes up his retirement letter and finishing his old assignment by signing several documents online, several minutes goes by and he all done writing. Harper wants to go out for a fresh air and a final gaze on the department he is going to leave soon when in the same moment a radio on his belt buzzing and transmitting something. It was transmitting a distress call from another officer who is on scene facing an armed robbery who shots at the officer in Montgomery, he sighs and talks to himself while increasing his speed pace towards the armory to grab a war bag and a shotgun. He puts all of his gear inside the trunk of his cruiser and swiftly making his way towards Montgomery through nearest exit.

After his arrival in the Montgomery, he immediately seek cover and reach for his shotgun that he brought and tries to get his bearings over the situation. His adrenaline pumped up all over his body and he rushes in to return fire towards the suspect, after a short brief of pushing forward his survival instinct kicks in that tells him to retreat to cover and waits for backup to arrive. After the backups arrived he gives a suppressing fire towards the suspects to give time and room for the officers who advance towards the fugitive. Not long he catches a bullet towards his head twice that fatal enough to end someone's life, his life were flashing quickly before his eyes and thinks 'are my life is going to end like this? leaving all the things I had behind.' before slumping down falling to the ground powerless as his life slowly fading away due to massive blood loss and fatal damage received on his frontal lobe.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Edited by daigoardan53
Pemisahan screenshot OOC Jail, /mp dan /myid
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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

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  1. Sudah sesuai, cerita Character Kill saya memiliki 388 kata dan sekitar 2000 karakter yang terbagi menjadi 3 paragraf
  2. Sudah sesuai, screenshot Character Kill terlampir dengan jumlah 10 screenshot.
  3. Sudah bersih, semua properti yang dimiliki di karakter ini sudah kosong dan tidak dititipkan kepada siapapun.
  4. Mati pada saat bertugas di momen keputusan ingin pensiun dari departemen.
  5. Sudah, terlampir pada 'Screenshots of /myid and /mp'
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8 jam yang lalu, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Pending, berikut beberapa point pending

  1. Untuk screenshot OOC Jail, /mp dan /myid coba dibuat terpisah saja.

Halo, formulir Namechange Request saya sudah diperbaiki sesuai dengan arahan yang diberikan

  1. Screenshot OOC Jail, /mp dan /myid sudah dibuat terpisah.
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