pending Dyonte_Collins [neozaa]

[neoza]

Dyonte_Collins

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           On Monday 26 August 2005 in Las Collinas, a child named Dyonte Collins a.k.a D'co was born, of African-American race. D'co was born in a bad area, many gang wars often occurred in his area. D'co's family often fights and causes domestic violence. D'co always cries when he sees his mother being beaten by his own father. At that time, D'co held a grudge against his own father. D'co promised himself that when he grew up he would take revenge on his father.

 

           12 years later, when D'co was at school, he saw that there was a war between gangs taking place in his school area, D'co saw many victims falling there. D'co secretly took the gun belonging to the dead victim, then he took the gun home and kept it in his cupboard. The next day D'co's mother saw a gun in his cupboard and his mother was shocked, then D'co's mother asked D'co whose gun this was, and he answered that he got the gun at a toy shop near his school, and his mother believed and felt relieved after finding out that it was a toy gun.

 

           4 days later D'co saw his mother being thrown with a plate by his father, D'co cried and his emotions started to rise, he ran to his room and took a gun that was in his cupboard then he shot his father many times full of revenge. D'co's mother could only cry silently seeing her son kill his own father. D'co apologized to his mother and said that this was the only way that could stop all of D'co's mother's suffering. D'co didn't feel sorry because he didn't want his mother to die at the hands of his own father.

 

           2 years later after the death of D'co's father, D'co's mother died of a heart attack, D'co felt very devastated at that time because he now lives alone without any family or friends to accompany him. D'co was very depressed and didn't know what else to do, and finally D'co became homeless on the side of the road. One day he saw a group of people gathered, so he approached them and it turned out it was a group of drug dealers. After chatting, D'co was offered to sell drugs and it didn't take long to think that D'co agreed to the offer.

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan

URL Namechange:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/292891-cn-frederick_olister-to-dyonte_collins-neozaa/#comment-2863046

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
neozaa

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

neoza

 

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Saya neoza selaku pemilik account UCP neozaa bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Dyonte_Collins) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

[adit0078]

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
   Spoiler

   

    

 

[neoza]

1. tidak

2. 4-6 bulan

3. Namechange

4. Tidak

5.Tidak

6. Dirumah

[adit0078]

Perbaiki

 

1. Gunakan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol 

2. Pada bagian dibawah ini tolong di edit kemudian isi nama UCP dan Forum yang kamu punya

 

1 jam yang lalu, neoza said:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

 

[neoza]

 

14 hours ago, adit0078 said:

Perbaiki

 

1. Gunakan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol 

2. Pada bagian dibawah ini tolong di edit kemudian isi nama UCP dan Forum yang kamu punya

 

 

sudah min

[adit0078]

Apakah ada UCP lain yang kamu punya ?

[neoza]

tidak

[adit0078]

Accepted

[adit0078]

Jogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @neoza

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@adit0078
JG:RP Helper Team