$Picek$ Posted November 5, 2023 Posted November 5, 2023 UCP Name: Taufik1 Old Character: Lawrence Messina Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/253020-lawrence_messina-taufik1/#comment-2452861 New Character: Benjamin Pole Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: USA Reason for name change request: Ingin mengubah alur roleplay, menghilangkan catatan kriminal, sekaligus ingin mencoba roleplay yang baru. Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC Jail: /myid: /mymp: CK Story: Spoiler In a lit alley Lawrence Messina, a man, in his late forties found himself trapped in the dangerous grip of his former life. With a history in the underworld of crime, he had hoped to leave behind the shadows of his past. However tonight the darkness seemed to call out to him. As Lawrence hurried down the passageway an unsettling feeling crawled up his back. The faint sound of footsteps echoed through the air sending a shiver down his spine. His breath caught as he recognized the steps drawing closer—a sign of impending danger. He muttered under his breath knowing that there was no way to avoid what was about to come. A figure emerged from the darkness—a silhouette wrapped in the embrace of nightfall. Lawrence's heart raced with recognition, it was Frank ''The Sticky Fingers'' Gizzi, an enduring rival from his days tangled up in affairs. The bitter history, between them, crackled through the atmosphere like sparks. "So you thought you could run away huh? Larry." Frank's rough voice carried a tone laced with a menace that weighed heavily on the air. Lawrence tried to ease the tension. "Listen here, Frankie. I'm done with all this. I've got no business with you or ours anymore." Frank's laughter shattered the silence. "Once you're, in there's no way right? That's the rule. You've just violated it." Before Lawrence had a chance to react Frank sprang into action. In a motion, a glimmer of steel appeared in Frank's hand. Lawrence's instincts kicked in. It was too late. The blade struck its target with precision piercing Lawrence's chest. Pain surged through his body as the world spun around him in a haze of agony and remorse. Falling to the ground Lawrence clutched his chest tightly while his fingers were stained with red. He struggled to breathe as he faced his moments thoughts racing through his mind as he regretted the path he had chosen. As darkness closed in on him the echoes of his misdeeds faded into oblivion. Frank stood there watching as life slowly left Lawrence's eyes chilling echo reverberated through the alleywayᅳa whisper that spoke of a buried past that was never truly forgotten. Lawrence Messina, a player in this /game/ now lay motionless, a casualty, amidst the unending saga of organized crime. CK Screenshots: Bukti
newlyzer Posted November 5, 2023 Posted November 5, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$Picek$ Posted November 5, 2023 Author Posted November 5, 2023 3 hours ago, newlyzer said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. Sudah 2. Sudah. 3. Sudah. 4. Pembunuhan yang disebabkan oleh pengkhianatan. 5. Sudah.
newlyzer Posted November 5, 2023 Posted November 5, 2023 Reviewing, nanti setelah di-approve silakan cek '/autocn' dulu, jadi jika ada kesalahan bisa PM saya.
newlyzer Posted November 5, 2023 Posted November 5, 2023 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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