Erich Posted September 25, 2023 Posted September 25, 2023 UCP Name: ErichZabel087087 Old Character: Damian_Cole Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/277578-damian_cole-erichzabel087087/#comment-2700998 New Character: Dayvone_Duke Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: United States Reason for name change request: Ingin beroleplay sesuai dengan fng yang dituju. Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC JAIL : Spoiler /myid : Spoiler /mp : Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler This story begins with two friends who are relaxing in the park, they are named Dawood and Damian. Dawood and Damian are very close friends as they have the same thoughts and attitudes. One day Damian invited Dawood to play basketball together at a basketball court not far from where they were, but Dawood wanted to go home first to get his equipment. The two of them then immediately entered the car and Damian hit the gas hard. Damian and Dawood arrived at Dawood's house, Dawood asked Damian to wait for Damian outside while Dawood got his equipment. Damian felt it was okay to wait outside while playing with his cellphone while waiting for Dawood to come out. 20 minutes passed and Dawood didn't come out of the house, feeling tired of waiting outside Damian forced his way into the house while shouting Dawood's name to come out quickly. Dawood, who heard Damian's scream, immediately came out of his room. Seeing Dawood who had just come out made Damian annoyed and asked why Dawood took so long to come out, but Dawood still answered that there was no problem. Because Damian was too lazy to stay in the house for a long time, he finally stopped asking questions and immediately embraced Dawood to take him into the car and immediately left. During the journey, they talked about a lot of things in the car, joking around with lots of funny things, so that Damian almost hit a pole. 16 minutes had passed and they finally arrived at the basketball court. Damian immediately warmed up by stretching his body first before competing with Dawood. After warming up, the two of them immediately played a heated one on one game because they were both great players. During the game, Damian said a lot of dirty words to Dawood, which made Dawood feel annoyed with Damian's words. A heated debate broke out between the two of them and Damian's words this time were too much, so Dawood had to take out his gun and start shooting straight at Damian. This shot caused Damian to lose his life because he was shot in the heart. Dawood, who saw Damian covered in blood, panicked about what he had done, then he immediately ran away from the location, leaving Damian's body. CK Screenshots: Bukti
daigoardan53 Posted September 25, 2023 Posted September 25, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
Erich Posted September 26, 2023 Author Posted September 26, 2023 On 26/9/2023 at 02.35, daigoardan53 said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. Iya 2. Sudah 3. Sudah 4. Perkelahian antar teman berujung tertembak 5. Sudah @daigoardan53
Erich Posted September 27, 2023 Author Posted September 27, 2023 @daigoardan53 maaf min tapi ini sudah 3 hari dan belum ada respon bagaimana kelanjutan ck saya?
daigoardan53 Posted September 29, 2023 Posted September 29, 2023 Request Changename kamu ditolak dengan alasan: Alur cerita matinya karakter kamu dinilai kurang masuk akal, silahkan membuat alur cerita mati karakter kamu yang lebih kreatif.
daigoardan53 Posted September 29, 2023 Posted September 29, 2023 Your name change has been denied, please be sure to follow the guidelines before making a one.
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