$glemrawk$ Posted August 4, 2023 Posted August 4, 2023 Jack_Janiak Jackson Neil Janiak, also known as Jack "Jax" Janiak, was born in Lewisham, England, in the early 90s. His father, John Neilson, played the trombone professionally in the London jazz scene in addition to working as a guard at Buckingham Palace. Her mother, Annie Beverly, dropped out of school due to her lack of scholastic performance and enlisted in the British army. Jax was requested to go to Redbridge, England, following Annie's unwed pregnancy. And John vowed that he would visit Annie to propose to her after finishing his work. Jax's mother waited for John for years, but he never showed up, which led her to believe that he had abandoned her. Jax's mother, Annie, made the decision to wed Matthew in 1994, but after only six months of marriage, Matthew passed away from cancer. Because John, his original father, had abandoned Jax since he was a young child, Jax was saddened by the death of his stepfather. They relocated to the East Los Santos neighborhood in 1996, when Jax started his academic career. When Jax was 17 years old, he had already started wandering the streets of Los Santos and had never returned home. One of his favorite hangouts was at a friend's clothing store. While hanging out, Jax meets an American policeman who asks Jax to assist him in setting up a fictitious marriage so he can obtain a work visa from the government. Jax, however, declined at the moment since he did not want anything to do with the government. Jax frequently busked in Los Santos to pay for food. He constantly sang songs by Alice Cooper, but people would always give him money to stop. One day after a journalist had discreetly taken a photo of Jax busking, Jax displayed the darker side of his character by attacking the man with a motorcycle chain. Jax was taken into custody once more, this time on charges of assault that resulted in a 5-month sentence. Jax went through a tough detoxification process when he was incarcerated in order to overcome his drug addiction. Jax was released on $30,000.00 bail after being held captive for a month he has now overcome his drug addiction. Angie Napalm rounded up some of him pals, including Austin Strobeck and Ritchie Funkhole to raise the bail money needed to free Jax. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun Account UCP yang saya miliki: Donkennedys Account Forum yang saya miliki: GlemRawk Saya GlemRawk selaku pemilik account UCP Donkennedys bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jack_Janiak) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
zainsandi Posted August 4, 2023 Posted August 4, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$glemrawk$ Posted August 4, 2023 Author Posted August 4, 2023 1. Tidak 2. 1 Tahun lebih 3. Buat baru 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di rumah
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zainsandi Posted August 5, 2023 Posted August 5, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @GlemRawk, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @zainsandi JG:RP Helper Team
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