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[CN] Achmad_Rizky to Treshawn_Winterlay (satplayz)


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UCP Name: satplayz

Old Character: Achmad_Rizky

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Treshawn_Winterlay

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United States of America

 


Reason for name change request:

ingin mengubah alur RP
ingin menghapus crime record

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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CK Story:

Spoiler

One of the most infamous illegal street racers in Los Santos was Achmad Rizky. He loved to move quickly and was renowned for his fearlessness on the streets. Unfortunately, his carelessness would ultimately result in his premature passing.

 

One day, Achmad and his squad were hanging around his home. They are talking about how quiet the street racing scene has been nowadays. Suddenly Jamal, Achmad’s mechanic, says that he knows a street scene that was about to come up tonight. Interested in hearing that, Achmad quickly gets in his car and tunes it, preparing for the street race that night.

 

The street race scene that night was really packed. Not only that it had a lot of crazy fast cars, but it was also attended by a lot of “O.G” in the street race community who Achmad recognize

some of them. Without much talking, he lines up his car beside a Cheetah with a black-tinted window and gets ready to race.

 

The race was really tight. Both cars were really fast. The Cheetah was good on the corners while the Infernus that Achmad drove was very fast on the straight. Despite the lack of cornering

speed, Achmad crosses the finish line to take the win. After the win, Achmad decided to head back home because he was sleepy.

 

Unfortunately without Achmad’s attention, he was ambushed by the rival he raced that evening as he was making his way home. The rival gang member did a PIT maneuver toward Achmad’s car, and he lost control of his vehicle and crashed. It turns out that the guy Achmad was racing was his old rival who seeks revenge after what Achmad did to his girlfriend. Shortly after that, he unleashes hell on Achmad by shooting a few shots of .50 Cal at him. Achmad was seriously injured due to the shots he took. He was then taken to the hospital, but he passed away from his wounds.

 

The racing community was shocked to learn of Achmad's passing. The demise of such a gifted and daring athlete grieved his friends and fellow racers. The murder was reported to the police, but the gang members were cautious not to leave any trail of evidence.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Posted

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted
2 minutes ago, ChiiYoshiki said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. sudah

2. sudah

3. sudah

4. balas dendam

5. sudah

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Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.

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