Syabian Posted January 20, 2023 Posted January 20, 2023 Bancroft Callister Bancroft Callister Born in the United States, August 9 2002. Bancroft was born into a poor family because his father and mother worked outside the city. Bancroft was accompanied by his aunt, Bancroft was already 10 years old and Bancroft was also focused on school. Bancroft always being bullied by his schoolmates. Bancroft ran to his aunt's house to report that Bancroft had been bullied by his friend. His aunt comforted Bancroft because Bancroft was crying, Bancroft was starting to calm down and Bancroft wanted to take revenge when he was big, Bancroft became a very good boy naughty and he follows the small alleys in the town that Bancroft lives in. Bancroft Callister is also 15 years old, Bancroft has entered a very large alley in the city and he often sells guns and cocaine. Bancroft is also looking for someone who used to bully Bancroft with punches and kicks. Bancroft finds him walking towards him. the person's house and Bancroft beat him very hard, the person was very battered because he was beaten by Bancroft, and Bancroft also continued their activities by playing skateboard and basketball. Because of that's, Bancroft's hobby, Bancroft also often plays skateboard and basketball with his friends. Bancroft is also 17 years old and he often sells guns and cocaine if no one buys gun or cocaine. Bancroft also plays skateboard and basketball with his friends. the police because he was caught taking cocaine into the hospital, Bancroft now often robs people who are working like miner, truck, and mechanic, now Bancroft holds the alley because the former leader of the gang has died and Bancroft already holds the city in only a few areas, Bancroft more often pranks people who pass through the area with their friends Bancroft and his friends have bought guns and cocaine from their friends. or even to Bancroft. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: biansamp Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Syabian Saya Syabian selaku pemilik account UCP biansamp bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Bancroft Callister) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
daigoardan53 Posted January 20, 2023 Posted January 20, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Syabian Posted January 20, 2023 Author Posted January 20, 2023 1 hour ago, daigoardan53 said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents 1. tidak 2. 6 bulan - 1 tahun 3. Buat baru 4. tidak 5. tidak 6. Di rumah
daigoardan53 Posted January 20, 2023 Posted January 20, 2023 Buat spasi di setiap awal sebelum kata pertama di paragraf, sekiranya 5 spasi. Perhatikan & perbaiki penggunaan tanda baca yang kurang / berlebihan (perbanyak penggunaan titik untuk mengakhiri kalimat, koma untuk jeda sesaat di dalam kalimat) Perhatikan & perbaiki pengetikan kata yang salah / typo. Harap periksa ulang keseluruhan cerita karakter dengan teliti dan silahkan membalas jika semua sudah diperbaiki.
Syabian Posted January 20, 2023 Author Posted January 20, 2023 5 hours ago, daigoardan53 said: Buat spasi di setiap awal sebelum kata pertama di paragraf, sekiranya 5 spasi. Perhatikan & perbaiki penggunaan tanda baca yang kurang / berlebihan (perbanyak penggunaan titik untuk mengakhiri kalimat, koma untuk jeda sesaat di dalam kalimat) Perhatikan & perbaiki pengetikan kata yang salah / typo. Harap periksa ulang keseluruhan cerita karakter dengan teliti dan silahkan membalas jika semua sudah diperbaiki. untuk setiap paragraf sudah saya edit 5 spasi dan semuanya saya sudah edit
daigoardan53 Posted January 21, 2023 Posted January 21, 2023 On 20/1/2023 at 10.52, Syabian said: Bancroft Callister Born in the United States, August 9 2002. Bancroft was born into a poor family because his father and mother worked outside the city[.] Bancroft was accompanied by his aunt, Bancroft was already 10 years old and Bancroft was also focused on school[.] Bancroft always being bullied by his schoolmates[,] Bancroft ran to his aunt's house to report that Bancroft had been bullied by his friend[. His] aunt comforted Bancroft because Bancroft was crying, Bancroft was starting to calm down and Bancroft wanted to take revenge when he was big, Bancroft became a very good boy naughty and he follows the small alleys in the town that Bancroft lives in. Bancroft Callister is also 15 years old, Bancroft has entered a very large alley in the city and he often sells guns and cocaine[.] Bancroft is also looking for someone who used to bully Bancroft with punches and kicks. Bancroft finds him walking towards him. the person's house and Bancroft beat him very hard, the person was very battered because he was beaten by Bancroft, and Bancroft also continued their activities by playing skateboard and basketball[.] Because of [that's] Bancroft's hobby, Bancroft also often plays skateboard and basketball with his friends. Bancroft is also 17 years old and he often sells guns and cocaine if no one buys gun or cocaine. Bancroft also plays skateboard and basketball with his friends. the police because he was caught taking cocaine into the hospital, Bancroft now often robs people who are working like [miners, truckers, and mechanics.] now Bancroft holds the alley because the former leader of the gang has died and Bancroft already holds the city in only a few areas, Bancroft more often pranks people who pass through the area with their friends[.] Bancroft and his friends have bought guns and cocaine from their friends or even to Bancroft. Perbaiki kata-kata dan tanda baca seperti yang saya sudah tebalkan dan beri kurung siku
Syabian Posted January 22, 2023 Author Posted January 22, 2023 18 hours ago, daigoardan53 said: Perbaiki kata-kata dan tanda baca seperti yang saya sudah tebalkan dan beri kurung siku sudah saya perbaiki
daigoardan53 Posted January 23, 2023 Posted January 23, 2023 On 20/1/2023 at 10.52, Syabian said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Isi dengan akun UCP & akun forum yang kamu miliki (awali account forum dengan tanda @)
Syabian Posted January 24, 2023 Author Posted January 24, 2023 On 1/23/2023 at 10:49 AM, daigoardan53 said: Isi dengan akun UCP & akun forum yang kamu miliki (awali account forum dengan tanda @) sudah saya isi
daigoardan53 Posted January 25, 2023 Posted January 25, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Syabian, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @daigoardan53 JG:RP Helper Team
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