$gethaise$ Posted January 13, 2023 Posted January 13, 2023 Jeziel Carballar One night, a child named Jeziel Carballar who came from Mexico was born, the name was given by his father, Jeziel Carballar, called Ziel, Ziel has an older brother, older brother Ziel, is 17 years old, his older brother Ziel works as a woodcutter and Ziel's father worked as a truck driver, Ziel's mother and brother, loved him very much, Ziel's mother always cared for Ziel, and a few years later Ziel was 16 years old, and at that time Ziel started helping his brother work by cutting wood to sell , Ziel and his brother worked hard, and they also got quite a lot of money, and Ziel's father also worked hard, then when his brother Ziel was chopping wood, his brother Ziel was crushed by the wood until he was injured, and also Ziel was quite panicked because he saw his brother injured , Ziel immediately called his father, to help his brother, and Ziel's father arrived at the place where his brother was injured, his brother Ziel was brought to the hospital. home, and his brother Ziel was given medicine to recover, then the next day, his brother Ziel told him to cut wood himself into the forest to work, Ziel also obeyed his brother's orders, he headed to the forest to cut a piece of wood, and when Ziel cut a wood, he saw a gang of bad people looking for a prey, Ziel was panicking there and he hid behind a tree so that the evil gang wouldn't see him. Then for a while Ziel was hiding, the gang of bad people went away, then saw and they were gone, Ziel continued his work of chopping wood, to make money, and when Ziel had cut a piece of wood, he saw a river, Ziel approached the river, Ziel also felt his body warm, and Ziel thought of cooling his body for a moment, then Ziel bathed in the river, there Ziel bathed for an hour, then he went back up to the mainland, and he put his clothes back on, then he lifted the wood came back, and headed to a wood selling place, when Ziel had arrived he sold all the wood, and got the money, then Ziel rushed to his house again, when Ziel headed for his house, he saw the gang of bad people again, Ziel ran away from them, and headed home because he had a feeling of fear, a few moments, Ziel arrived at his house, then Ziel gave the money to his father, his father was happy to see that Ziel was able to make his own money, for a while Ziel was asleep, then when Ziel was sleeping, the gang of bad people came to his house, and they asked for money from Ziel's father, Ziel's father did not want to give the money. For a while, the gang of bad people got angry, and beat Ziel's father, Ziel's father fought against them, and hit back at the evil gang, and also his brother Ziel helped his father, they also fought in front of his house, at that time one of the gang members the bad guys brought a gun and shot Ziel's father in the leg, and Ziel's father fell and felt pain, as well as his brother Ziel was shot in the chest and hit the heart, then his brother Ziel died, his father Ziel was killed too, and The gang of bad people also took money belonging to Ziel's father, then Ziel's mother left the house, and she was shocked to see her child and husband dead, then Ziel's mother was also shot to death, a few moments Ziel woke up, and left the house, then he saw his family dead in front of his house, Ziel was very shocked, then Ziel cried without stopping, Ziel buried his family behind his house. Several years later Ziel was twenty-two years old, and he became a vicious man, Ziel also bought a gun, and looked for a gang of bad people, because he believed, that they killed his family, then when Ziel walked he saw someone that person who was old with the characteristics of a shirt with the same logo, then without the long edge Ziel shot them one by one, they scattered running away, Ziel also killed them, then Ziel was satisfied with those who had been killed, then Ziel saw a gang motorized people, then Ziel joins them. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/250357-cn-jesse-cotillard-to-jeziel-carballar-dirgantara/#comment-2428978 Account UCP yang saya miliki: dirgantara, hanya itu UCP saya. Account Forum yang saya miliki: $Braverezz$ Saya Braverezz selaku pemilik account UCP dirgantara bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jeziel Carballar) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
BGenk Posted January 13, 2023 Posted January 13, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$gethaise$ Posted January 13, 2023 Author Posted January 13, 2023 38 minutes ago, BGenk said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents 1. Tidak. 2. 6 Bulan - 1 Tahun. 3. Namechange. 4. Tidak, hanya UCP dirgantara. 5. Tidak, hanya Forum Braverezz. 6. Di Rumah.
BGenk Posted January 15, 2023 Posted January 15, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Braverezz, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @BGenk JG:RP Helper Team
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