$gethaise$ Posted January 10, 2023 Posted January 10, 2023 UCP Name: Dirgantara Old Character: Jesse Cotillard Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/242506-jesse_cotillard-dirgantara/#comment-2353316 New Character: Jeziel Carballar Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: Mexico Reason for name change request: - Out of SummerHouse Hustlers. [ Not in FCK, because Rank is still low, and not insiders, so just ordinary CK. ] - Want to join one of the FnG. Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti /mp Bukti Jail CK. /myid CK Story: Spoiler one afternoon, Jesse just woke up, then came out of his apartment, and saw two of his friends standing on the sidewalk, and then Jesse came up to them, and the names of the friends were Cameron Tibbs and Jeffery Clark, when Jesse came up to them, they were chatting together, and Cameron asked Jesse something, and also Jeffery, said something with Jesse, they had a long conversation and Jesse there was quite awkward because, he was afraid of being caught if he betrayed them. and at that moment, Cameron saw Jesse strangely, and Cameron said something to Jesse, and Jesse was confused to see Cameron, then Cameron said to Jesse, why did you betray us, Cameron said, Jesse was confused by Cameron's words, he felt afraid, because he had betrayed them, Jesse was afraid of being killed by Cameron, then Jesse just said, he didn't know what happened to him, and Jesse said, he did it by force, then Jeffery said, if that's a choice, don't force yourself too much, with a look on his face that is quite angry and annoyed. a few minutes they chatted, Cameron asked Jeffery and Jesse to go to the car, and wanted to go somewhere, Jesse followed them, then they walked to the place Cameron wanted to go, Jesse there looked quite panicked, because he was afraid of what would happen with them, Jesse, however, was just being normal. They also arrived at a place, which was on top of a mountain, and there was a small hut there, Jesse just looked normal, as if he didn't know what was going to happen, then Cameron, climbed up the mountain by car his, and Cameron got out of the car and Jesse and Jeffery, there Jesse and two of his friends, entered a hut, and Cameron told Jesse, stand in the far end corner of the hut. Then Jesse asked Cameron something, Jesse said, why did you bring me here, because Jesse didn't know what Cameron and Jeffery wanted, Jesse didn't know what they both meant, then when Jesse asked it came back, Jeffery told him to be quiet with feelings of anger and annoyance. then Cameron said and immediately shot Jesse, Jeffery also shot Jesse, and Jesse died on the spot because they were shot by the two of them, and Jesse's body was taken by them, to be thrown away, Cameron also carried him Jesse, and put him in the car, with black mirrors, they went to a place where there was water, because they wanted to throw Jesse's body into the sea so no one would find out, a moment later, they had arrived where they were going, without thinking twice, they immediately threw Jesse there, and also they left Jesse's body there, and Jesse's body was washed away under the water, and was not found. CK Screenshots: Bukti
Yuugure Posted January 10, 2023 Posted January 10, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$gethaise$ Posted January 10, 2023 Author Posted January 10, 2023 1 jam yang lalu, Yuugure said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. Sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan. 2. Sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan. 3. /mp saya sudah bersih. 4. Penghianatan terhadap teman, lalu di bunuh. 5. Sudah di jail ooc.
Yuugure Posted January 11, 2023 Posted January 11, 2023 Untuk Story CK, ada 1 Story yang tidak ada RP atau Chatlog apapun, coba dibuat seakan /do atau RP tentang situasi sekitar dan sedang melakukan apa.
$gethaise$ Posted January 11, 2023 Author Posted January 11, 2023 @Yuugure Done edited. I have corrected it, please checked again.
Yuugure Posted January 13, 2023 Posted January 13, 2023 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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