$Picek$ Posted November 28, 2022 Posted November 28, 2022 UCP Name: Taufik1 Old Character: Alejandro_Montoya Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/211870-alejandro_montoya-taufik1/#comment-2048541 New Character: Lawrence_Messina Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: USA Reason for name change request: Ingin mengganti alur roleplay, menghapus crime record. Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC Jail/myid /mp CK Story: Spoiler Alejandro Montoya is often called Alex. He is the president of the Manoderecha MC Sahuarita charter, and he has dictated for the club for decades. They have been in business related to motorcycles, ranging from selling motorcycles, until they catch their wings into the illegal realm. Like selling drugs by selling the item into a candy fitted with a horse toy. And after a few years, they run the business because there are some of the members do not agree with the business undertaken by Inhue Castrejon. Finally, Alejandro Montoya spoke one-on-one with Juderias Araya, about a safer business, and the law, that is, the MMA business. After a few years Alejandro, and his friends into the business to achieve success, the business was already a little done, because some friends of Alejandro were busy controlling the club that was experiencing crucial problems. One of them is that there is a collection of Japanese youth, who claim to be Higanbana, a motorcycle club that uses noisy exhaust or is referred to in Japanese as Bosozoku. They deliberately made the MMA business exactly the same as Manoderecha MC, starting from the rules, sparring schedules, and business labels that are almost similar. This outraged the members of Manoderecha, as they were perceived as having taken away business ideas, money, and more. At night, Alejandro makes an open discussion with them, but they flatly contradict Alejandro's decision because Manoderecha MC will either shut down the business or they will have to pay a fine, which is $50,000. This fantastic number makes Higanbana increasingly become to compete with Manoderecha MC. After several years of dispute, Alejandro went to the clubhouse, and there happened to be Juderias Araya a member of Manoderecha MC who was looking to hold an open fight with Higanbana as a last alternative for resolving issues about the MMA business. After fighting for roughly 40 minutes, Alejandro was forced to be rushed to the hospital due to a sharp object brought by one of the members from Higanbana. Unfortunately, he died a few moments later the ambulance that took him to the hospital because he had severe bleeding in his brain. CK Screenshots: Bukti
humbletin Posted November 28, 2022 Posted November 28, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$Picek$ Posted November 28, 2022 Author Posted November 28, 2022 1. Sudah, 300 kata lebih 2. Sudah 3. Sudah, karakter alejandro montoya tidak pernah memiliki properti apapun 4. Meninggal karena pendarahan diotak setelah perkelahian panjang 5. Sudah
humbletin Posted November 28, 2022 Posted November 28, 2022 Thank you for your all contribution during Roleplaying in Manoderecha MC, goodluck there!
humbletin Posted November 28, 2022 Posted November 28, 2022 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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