$someoneloveyou$ Posted August 15, 2022 Posted August 15, 2022 Eric_Sollozo Eric Sollozo, or Richie, was an orthodox Italian-Catholic descendant. He came to the city of Los Santos expecting a change in his life. All this time he was in NYC as a mafia spy named Joseph, who is now most likely dead. After knowing that he could no longer rely on Joseph, Eric decided to look for a job and coincidentally met an Italian group that he suspected was also a mafia group. Because Eric has a life principle, which is wanting himself to be rich, he thinks of taking opportunities. and starting from the bottom, because he couldn't count on Joseph anymore. Today, Eric is still trying to find Joseph because he is the one who left Eric in the city without a job with the intention of killing him. Now Eric already has the mindset that Joseph is just trash. Because of the behavior of Eric, who has always been an informant for a mafia member, now Eric is trying to use his talents in other ways; namely, Eric Sollozo wants to work and do business in order to get rich, with a principle that he adheres to. Many mafia members referred to Eric as a "Friend of Mine" because he was connected by others to several mafia members, which means Eric has many connections and a great opportunity. Because of his meeting with several people who made Eric confident in starting a business and made Eric understand that this world needs evil in order for everything to be successful, now Eric is starting so that he can be seen by many people. So far, Eric has only followed his will. Now that he feels that the others he serves are fools like Joseph, who have absolutely no principles of life and are stupid, now is the time for Eric to start a new life as one of the companions of the wise men. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 tahun lebih URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/229479-cn-edward_carlson-to-eric_sollozo-mripaldi/#comment-2227575 Account UCP yang saya miliki: mripaldi Account Forum yang saya miliki: Code of Silence Saya Code of Silence selaku pemilik account UCP mripaldi bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Eric_Sollozo) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
BGenk Posted August 15, 2022 Posted August 15, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$someoneloveyou$ Posted August 15, 2022 Author Posted August 15, 2022 Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah)
BGenk Posted August 16, 2022 Posted August 16, 2022 Ada beberapa yang perlu direvisi: Berikan 5 spasi setidaknya pada awal paragraf On 8/15/2022 at 4:50 PM, Code of Silence said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Di isi dengan UCP dan Forum yang kamu gunakan sekarang
$someoneloveyou$ Posted August 16, 2022 Author Posted August 16, 2022 41 minutes ago, BGenk said: Ada beberapa yang perlu direvisi: Berikan 5 spasi setidaknya pada awal paragraf Di isi dengan UCP dan Forum yang kamu gunakan sekarang Done.
BGenk Posted August 17, 2022 Posted August 17, 2022 23 hours ago, BGenk said: Berikan 5 spasi setidaknya pada awal paragraf Yang ini disetiap paragraf, bukan paragraf 1 saja
$someoneloveyou$ Posted August 17, 2022 Author Posted August 17, 2022 Alright, all done... 2 hours ago, BGenk said: Yang ini disetiap paragraf, bukan paragraf 1 saja
BGenk Posted August 18, 2022 Posted August 18, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Code of Silence, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@BGenk JG:RP Helper Team
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