$someoneloveyou$ Posted July 24, 2022 Posted July 24, 2022 UCP Name: mripaldi Old Character: Edward_Carlson Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/97223-edward-carlson-mripaldi/?tab=comments#comment-880587 New Character: Eric_Sollozo Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: United States Reason for name change request: Ingin mencari pengalaman dengan karakter baru. Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti CK Story: Spoiler Starting from "The Fat" Edward Carlson, doing business with Albert Polonzo, a human trafficking business. This entrepreneur is not a lawful job. That's why Edward has no legal authority because it's the same as seeking death by reporting to the police. Albert Polonzo is a person who takes care of management, or the business carried out by Edward. He acts as Edward's boss and is a person who gives a salary according to a percentage, so that Edward gets 75% of their total income. And Albert gets 25% of the total because all he does is sit at the table and doesn't take any risks. Understands that Albert actually needs more money for his family, so he makes him increase the percentage ratio he gets, from %25 to %40, with the fake accounting documents given to Edward. This happened for 6 months, which made Edward realize that Albert was cheating and that there was an intention to catch him. Until one moment, Edward intends to come and kill Albert in his office, but Albert already has this intention and makes Edward have to die horribly on his own property. Due to their rivalry, this could result in the tragic death of either party. Here, Edward was clearly dead and had become the end of him. For Albert, Edward's death was not a big deal because there were still many replacements from Albert's crew, consisting of his brothers, Marcello, James, and Thomson, to run his human trafficking business and allow this trading business to be one of the ones in town and have a turnover of billions. And after Edward died horribly on the spot, Albert thought of dumping Edward's body in a swamp which is said to have a lot of crocodiles in it. Making sure Edward's death doesn't bother Albert in the future, the trip from work took about 2 hours. There were a few times. Problems, from the breakdown of Albert's car to the fall of Edward's body when it was put in the trunk, frustrated Albert, and he pushed hard on the gas until he reached his destination. And as a result, Edward's corpse was floating among the dirty swamps. CK Screenshots: Bukti
$SuperWings$ Posted July 25, 2022 Posted July 25, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$someoneloveyou$ Posted July 25, 2022 Author Posted July 25, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Sudah. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Sudah. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Sudah. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Di bunuh dengan partner kerja, karena merebutkan kekuasaan Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? Sudah!
$SuperWings$ Posted July 25, 2022 Posted July 25, 2022 Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your changename.
$bubbles$ Posted July 25, 2022 Posted July 25, 2022 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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