Baby Shark Posted June 14, 2022 Posted June 14, 2022 (edited) Wilson_Abraham One night, on 08-17-2002, a child named Wilson Abraham was born, he lived with his mother and father in a city called Los Santos, Wilson was the only child of his mother and father, and Wilson's father himself worked as an employee at a product factory that's where Wilson and his family earn their money. In the opposite city called Las Venturas lived the grandmother of Wilson mother, Grandma Wilson only lived alone in the city of Las Venturas because her husband had died since Wilson was 5 years old, one night on 15-09-2020 when Wilson was 18 families Wilson got some bad news via a phone call from a neighbor near Grandma's house, the news was that Wilson grandmother passed out and was immediately taken to the hospital, at that time the Wilson family rushed to visit Grandma in the opposite town. 5 Hours later on the way The Wilson family has also arrived at the hospital and Wilson's grandmother has also been allowed to return to her home, when the Wilson family arrived at her grandmother's house, suddenly Wilson father discussed about her grandmother's life here. it's not worth living alone because Grandma is old and rarely supervises what activities Grandma does with it. Wilson father and mother also agreed to stay temporarily at Grandma's house, Dan Wilson himself was ordered to return to the city of Los Santos, which is the city of original from the Wilson himself. A few months later Wilson was used to living independently in his home such as doing activities that his mother usually did at home such as sweeping the house, washing clothes, scrubbing clothes, etc. Apart from his independent problems at home, Wilson also had his own problems, namely, the work he did. have to look for yourself in the city of Los Santos because the city can be said to be a very crowded city, so it is certain that it is very difficult to find work in that city. Day after day Wilson began to feel annoyed because he always failed or was rejected when applying for jobs, but Wilson father and mother continued to give encouragement via telephone, starting that day Wilson had started to have the motivation to apply again with more persistent efforts than before. and without giving up. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Babystark Account Forum yang saya miliki:Baby Shark Saya Baby Shark selaku pemilik account UCP BabyStark bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Wilson_Abraham) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited June 17, 2022 by Baby Shark
ChiiYoshiki Posted June 14, 2022 Posted June 14, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Baby Shark Posted June 14, 2022 Author Posted June 14, 2022 2 hours ago, ChiiYoshiki said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents 1. Ya 2. 1 - 3 Bulan 3. Buat baru 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di Warnet
ChiiYoshiki Posted June 15, 2022 Posted June 15, 2022 On 6/14/2022 at 10:07 AM, Baby Shark said: One night, on 08-17-2002, a child named Wilson Abraham was born, he lived with his mother and father in a city called Los Santos, Wilson was the only child of his mother and father, and Wilson's father himself worked as an employee at a product factory that's where Wilson and his family earn their money. In the opposite city called Las Venturas lived the grandmother of Wilson's mother, Grandma Wilson only lived alone in the city of Las Venturas because her husband had died since Wilson was 5 years old, one night on 15-09-2020 when Wilson was 18 families Wilson got some bad news via a phone call from a neighbor near Grandma's house, the news was that Wilson's grandmother passed out and was immediately taken to the hospital, at that time the Wilson family rushed to visit Grandma in the opposite town. Yang ini dijadikan 1 paragraf saja, jangan di enter sebelum "In the opposite city" On 6/14/2022 at 10:07 AM, Baby Shark said: and Wilson's Ini ada double spasi di antara kedua kata ini Jarak antara paragraf 1 dan 2 cukup 1 baris kosong saja (saat ini ada 2 baris kosong)
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ChiiYoshiki Posted June 17, 2022 Posted June 17, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Baby Shark, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@ChiiYoshiki JG:RP Helper Team
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