Mandol Situheang Posted March 26, 2022 Posted March 26, 2022 Kevin_Xirau Somewhere in the country of Mexico, there is a family that contains two people, namely a simple husband and wife who are carrying a son in their stomach, their family is very harmonious and very simple and a few months have passed and a son named Kevin Xirau was born. April 7, 2001, at 09:39 PM local time, Kevin Xirau was born perfectly without any defects or flaws, Xirau's father was very happy when he heard that his wife had finished giving birth and ended up safely during labor, the mother who was still unconscious after giving birth was brought into a room in the maternity clinic, the father who was reported by the doctor that his wife had survived and gave birth to a son he was very happy, and he immediately sat beside his wife and told that his son "Kevin" had been born safely without any flaws, and after a few hours his mother came to her senses and her mother was very happy with Kevin's arrival into this world safely and very grateful. And some time has passed Kevin is already a teenager and he is 9 years old. Because Kevin lives in a slum suburb in Mexico so his daily life is not like other normal children he lived like a naughty child in the surrounding area but the father who knew about it immediately reprimanded Kevin and scolded him because Kevin who was young did not understand it he was very angry with his father while saying harsh words to his father and his father immediately slapped Kevin's mouth and locked him in his room, when his mother heard that his mother went straight to Kevin's room and reprimanded him slowly like a mother's attitude to her beloved child, Kevin also said that he was upset with his father's attitude, his mother also explained all things related to his father's attitude such as why his father was angry with him. And Kevin also understood and but because he was still a teenager he only heard with one ear and he didn't remember when his father worked Kevin played again with his naughty friends even Kevin also liked to steal goods or food in a shop in the area together friends without knowing n his parents. And because of an incident, Kevin's father was hit by an accident and ended in death Kevin father was hit by a large truck that was passing in the area while he was returning to his house, when Kevin found out about it he was sad and cried and Kevin felt sorry for the incident as well as his mother, Kevin's mother was silent in the room like a sick person who didn't move after learning the news of her husband who died in an accident, and time passed until Kevin was 16 years old. When Kevin was 16 years old, his life was very chaotic and disorganized. He also lived like other naughty children and also because his father was gone and his mother was always at home because he heard that her husband had died Kevin became neglected he had to find a living to support himself and his mother, but Kevin does not make a living with a good job either he makes a living by making trouble such as stealing, robbing, and others. He acted with his friends in groups he didn't go to school, and time passed Kevin was already 18 years old when Kevin had finished hanging out with his friends when he went to his house he saw his mother was not breathing and fell on the floor, Kevin immediately screamed and asked for help by his neighbors, when his mother was taken to the hospital his mother was not breathing or was dead, Kevin stayed at home for three days after his mother's funeral but after three days of staying at home Kevin immediately went out of his house after being persuaded by his friends. And because Kevin is free or there is nothing to worry about in his life Kevin immediately lives more incorrectly, he is more aggressive when stealing and he causes chaos or causes trouble in the surrounding environment and makes residents uncomfortable with Kevin and his group, and 2 years have passed. Kevin is already 20 years old Kevin also considered moving from his past place Kevin also thought of a city his mother had said if his mother came from that city. Because Kevin already knew about it Kevin immediately went to the city after using the money he got after acting what he did, and the city was named the city of Los Santos, after Kevin got there he had nothing else Kevin was looking for money with his old nature again, namely stealing, robbing people around there, and also he often made chaos in the city he just occupied until he gets older. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Suher Account Forum yang saya miliki: Mandol Situheang . Saya Mandol Situheang selaku pemilik account UCP Suher bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Kevin_Xirau) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$Venti$ Posted March 26, 2022 Posted March 26, 2022 Under Review Sebelum saya memeriksa dan merevisi Character Story kamu lebih lanjut , silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan sejujur-jujurnya. 1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) 2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) 3. Kamu main JGRP dimana? (Rumah/Warnet) 4. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) 5. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? Sebutkan jika ada! (Ya/Tidak) 6. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Sebutkan jika ada! (Ya/Tidak) Dan jangan lupa mengikuti ketentuan dibawah ini. 1. Pastikan character kamu sudah minimal berlevel 3. 2. Menggunakan formulir untuk character story. 3. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) 4. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) 5. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). 6. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph.
Mandol Situheang Posted March 26, 2022 Author Posted March 26, 2022 (edited) 1. Ya 2. Kurang dari 1 bulan 3. Rumah 4. Buat baru 5. Tidak ada 6. Tidak Edited March 26, 2022 by Mandol Situheang
$Venti$ Posted March 26, 2022 Posted March 26, 2022 Keda ? apa itu keda ? Fotonya tolong di ganti sama yang kecil Masih ada penempatan titik koma yang salah tolong dibenarkan kembali dan huruf kapital yang seharusnya besar di bikin kecil dan yang kecil di bikin besar seperti disorganized. he -> disorganized. He
Mandol Situheang Posted March 26, 2022 Author Posted March 26, 2022 @Venti Sudah di perbaiki min mohon di cek kembali
$Venti$ Posted March 27, 2022 Posted March 27, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Mandol Situheang, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Venti JG:RP Helper Team
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