Kakoka Posted December 12, 2021 Posted December 12, 2021 Ellie_Willington Ellie Willington, Ellie is strong woman, athletic, powerfull. She was born at San Fierro, United States of America. Ellie grow up with her mother and her father, bicycle is her favorite vehicle to ride. Ellie always go everywhere with her bicycle, almost every time Ellie use her bicycle. Ellie fell in love with her bicycle. Her mother and father always support Ellie, but her parents want to Ellie become an independent, so they gave a challenge to Ellie to live alone without her parents at Los Santos and start making money, do socialization, and start a relationship by her self. Before Ellie going to Los Santos, Ellie cries a lot because she will leave her bicycle at San Fierro. Her parents stay at home, but Ellie is strong woman, she accepted the challenge from her parents to starts being independent and live at Los Santos. Ellie prepared all things to leave San Fierro until the time to leaving the city. This is the time Ellie say goodbye to her parents and her lovely bicycle, she promise, she will back to her parents and succeed and also don't want to make her parents disappointed. Her parents take Ellie to the subway, and help Ellie to leave the city, in that time, Ellie say goodbye to her parents again. In the subway, Ellie start to thinking what is the first thing she want to do. Ellie thinking about her goal on her new life. Accidently there is other person drop his newspaper. Ellie take the newspaper and start looking at the title "MTB Extreme Championship". Ellie read the newspaper about "MTB Extreme Championship" provided by San News and start making her first goal is to win the championship. Ellie thinks to get a job first and buy a Mountain Bike to participate on MTB Extreme Championship. Ellie is an athlete, so that's all about sport, Ellie can do it. Several hours later, Ellie finished her subway trip and start her new life at Los Santos. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Jay1234 Account Forum yang saya miliki:Kakoka Saya Kakoka selaku pemilik account UCP Jay1234 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Ellie_Willington) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Nadeez Posted December 12, 2021 Posted December 12, 2021 Jangan pakai google translate, masih ada grammar yang salah.
Kakoka Posted December 12, 2021 Author Posted December 12, 2021 (edited) 54 minutes ago, xDannz said: Jangan pakai google translate, masih ada grammar yang salah. Sebagian besar ini adalah pemikiran dari saya sendiri, mohon maaf jika salah, saya sudah edit beberapa, apakah masih salah? jika iya tolong beritahu grammar yang salah nya sebelah mana? biar saya belajar dari kesalahan saya, terimakasih Edited December 12, 2021 by Kakoka
Nadeez Posted December 13, 2021 Posted December 13, 2021 On 12/12/2021 at 5:39 PM, Kakoka said: She born at San Fierro, United States Of America. bicycle is Her favorit she was born, United States of America, favorite, Tolong penggunaan kapitalisasinya, dan juga verb nya juga diperhatikan.
Kakoka Posted December 14, 2021 Author Posted December 14, 2021 9 jam yang lalu, xDannz said: she was born, United States of America, favorite, Tolong penggunaan kapitalisasinya, dan juga verb nya juga diperhatikan. Sudah saya edit kembali, mohon di cek.
Kakoka Posted December 17, 2021 Author Posted December 17, 2021 @xDannz Mohon maaf tag, hanya mengingatkan sudah 2x24jam
Nadeez Posted December 18, 2021 Posted December 18, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Kakoka, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@xDannz JG:RP Helper Team
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