$Hydra$ Posted February 2, 2021 Posted February 2, 2021 (edited) Avelina Friederike Avelina Friederik is a Germany woman born on 12th of October 1992, she's a person that's into automotive, but due to her parents did not agree to support her hobby, she ran away from her parent's home and went to a city called Los Santos with a friend named Yulia. Yulia is Avelina's closest friend since her school years. They went with only 0 in hand, carrying only a hundred and reckless capital. After they arrived in Los Santos, they were looking for a job but it doesn't seem that luck isn't on their side, Yulia was kidnapped by the famous mafia of Los Santos. Fortunately, the mafia boss have a close relationship with Yulia's parents, but not with Avelina's. The mafia set Yulia free, Yulia returned home after the incident. Avelina who was trapped was able to escape and run to crowds. The next day, Avelina went on search for a cheap homestay. She's not giving up on looking for a job. Days after days, she finally got a job with a bonus of a place to sleep. Avelina was paid the amount she wanted, 5 months later, she fought the real Los Santos rough lifestyle, she got a news that her parents passed away due to unknown disease. She went back home with sadness and regret after all the things she did. She went back to Los Santos after. Couple months went by, Avelina was proposed by a handsome young man named Axwel Shelby, a young man with a bunch of business in his hands in Los Santos. Avelina and Axwel lived a happy life in Los Santos, after that they went to a honey moon vacation, a couple months later, they were Avelina gave birth to a male twin, she named them Griffen Shelby and Peter Shelby, years after years, Avelina met her old friend Yulia, turns out Yulia also lived a happy live with her rich husband, just like Avelina and Axwel. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Memperdalam Roleplay Account UCP yang saya miliki: Bape dan HanWiliam Account Forum yang saya miliki:Han_Wiliam Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 2 tahun lebih Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya Han_Wiliam selaku pemilik account UCP Bape bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Avelina Friederike) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited February 2, 2021 by Han_Wiliam
$Hydra$ Posted February 2, 2021 Author Posted February 2, 2021 Just now, iamaldin said: character level berapa? Character level 3
$abLeh$ Posted February 2, 2021 Posted February 2, 2021 benerin lagin EYD sama tanda baca berikan spasi setelah tanda baca, jangan diberi spasi sebelum tanda baca gunakan awalan besar ketika sudah titik, bila koma berikan awalan kecil, kecuali nama orang/tempat/kota
$Hydra$ Posted February 2, 2021 Author Posted February 2, 2021 14 minutes ago, iamaldin said: benerin lagin EYD sama tanda baca berikan spasi setelah tanda baca, jangan diberi spasi sebelum tanda baca gunakan awalan besar ketika sudah titik, bila koma berikan awalan kecil, kecuali nama orang/tempat/kota Done has changed
$abLeh$ Posted February 2, 2021 Posted February 2, 2021 Quote gunakan awalan besar ketika sudah titik, bila koma berikan awalan kecil, kecuali nama orang/tempat/kota masih ada, tolong lebih teliti
$Hydra$ Posted February 2, 2021 Author Posted February 2, 2021 7 minutes ago, iamaldin said: masih ada, tolong lebih teliti Done
$abLeh$ Posted February 2, 2021 Posted February 2, 2021 sebutkan UCP yg pernah kamu mainkan selain ini.
$Hydra$ Posted February 2, 2021 Author Posted February 2, 2021 5 minutes ago, iamaldin said: sebutkan UCP yg pernah kamu mainkan selain ini. Hanya ini saja selain itu gapernah di mainkan.
$abLeh$ Posted February 2, 2021 Posted February 2, 2021 5 minutes ago, Han_Wiliam said: Hanya ini saja selain itu gapernah di mainkan. Kamu bermain dimana? dinet/rumah? lebih sering dimana?
$Hydra$ Posted February 2, 2021 Author Posted February 2, 2021 1 minute ago, iamaldin said: Kamu bermain dimana? dinet/rumah? lebih sering dimana? Main dirumah gapernah main di net
$abLeh$ Posted February 2, 2021 Posted February 2, 2021 To @Han_WiliamI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@iamaldinJG:RP Staff Team.
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