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Jason_Lang

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Jason Lang is a 20-year-old trucker who enjoys duck herding, camping and listening to the radio. He is empathic and positive, but can also be very savage and a bit bad at time management. He is an Indonesian Christian who defines himself as straight. He finished school and then left academia. He is allergic to eggs, he has a severe phobia of buttons and is obsessed with reading. Physically, Jason is in pretty good shape. He is at an average-height with darker skin, bald hair, and brown eyes. He grew up in a working-class neighborhood. Long ago after the incident that kills his father, he was raised by his mother. It was really a devastating years that he finally able to regain his strength. His father was a great guy who always taught Jason something new so he can develop well in life. Nothing scares him the most except the death of his beloved father.

 

He is currently in a relationship with Beau Louise Chen. Beau is 2 years older than him and works as a senior programmer. Jason's best friend is a gym assistant called Fay Morrison. They get on well most of the time. He also hangs around with Mae Diaz and Linda Moore. They always enjoy the theatre together. He is responsible, faithful, light-hearted, and perhaps a little too pompous. But there is nothing that can stop him from being the man he wants to be. He's crafty, self-reliant, and stubborn, this is not surprising by considering someone with a dreadful past. He always give his friends a good lessons in life, mostly about his past problem with dying father. He told his friends how to overcome those odds and come back stronger. His friends are admired by his passions, of how he manage things done, especially his girlfriend which is older than him but never a day without her being impressed by Jason.

 

He was born and grew up in a poor family in a broken capital, he lived in peace until he was about 15 years old, but at that point, everything changed. He killed somebody by accident during a suspicious accident and was shunned. Alongside a cousin, he had to survive in a vicious world. But with his bravery and powers, he managed to overcome all odds and start a new life. All of the past events have turned him into the man he became today. Moving into the new city where he never belongs, he now works on trucking and surviving in nature. By doing so, he hopes to find answers to the events of the past and finally find the happiness he has never had. He moved to the new city as his goal to have a new life, a life where he left everything behind including his mother. His mother was so sad yet so proud of him that he can finally live independently, staying out of his comfort zone. In this new city, his goal was also to become a powerful man that will encourage him to do everything better. And after all his hard work done, he will pay back his mother in his hometown and make her happy together alongside him.

 

 


 

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Ingin membeli Flat dan mengaktifkan fitur lainnya.

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
JAZSE

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
JAZSE

 

Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
Kurang dari 1 bulan

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di rumah

 


 

Saya JAZSE selaku pemilik account UCP JAZSE bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jason_Lang) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Halo brader.. @JAZSE

Saya mengecek Character Stories kamu, Silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah.

 

1. Sebutkan berapa UCP yang kamu miliki.

2. Character yang kamu mainkan ini level berapa ?

3. Apakah CS yang kamu buat sudah 300 kata ?

4. Apakah CS yang kamu ini hasil dari kamu sendiri atau meng-Copy CS milik orang lain?

5. Apakah nama Character kamu dan nama UCP kamu sudah benar? (biasanya, kalo salah di antara kedua tersebut, pas di masukin CS nya ke UCP itu suka ga bisa, jadi tolong pastikan kembali Nama Character dan nama UCP nya benar.)

6. Kamu main dimana? Rumah apa main di Warnet?

 

Note:
Selagi dalam pemeriksaan, cobalah kamu periksa kembali Character Story kamu, siapa tahu saja ada kesalahan disana, jika ada kesalahan maka perbaikilah dan kalo belum di respon CS nya, mohon bersabar ya kakak, pasti di respon kok.

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1. Punya 1 UCP.

2. Character level 5.

3. CS sudah 300 kata.

4. Bukan hasil copy CS orang lain.

5. Nama character dan UCP sudah benar.

6. Main dirumah.

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@JAZSE

perbaiki kembali:

  1. Paragraph pertama, kedua, dan ketiga atau semua setiap pagraph nya di tambahkan lagi cerita nya.
  2. Gunakan rata kanan kiri, bukan rata tengah ataupun bukan rata kiri. (Tidak tau rata kanan kiri? Lihat CS orang lain sebagai contoh nya.)
  3. Berikan 5 atau 10 SPACE di setiap awal paragraph nya, lalu sesuaikan dengan paragraph lain nya.
  4. Tepatkanlah KOMA dimana semestinya di tepatkan, jika kalimat tersebut masih bisa digunakan KOMA, makan gunakan lah KOMA, jika kalimat tersebut harus di beti TITIK, maka gunakan lah TITIK. jangan terlalu banyak KOMA maupun TITIK dalam Cerita Character Story kamu.
  5. Photo nya jangan terlalul BESAR, kecil kan lagi.
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