pending Raymond_Morientes [0Ace0]

[Randarious_Paul]

Raymond_Morientes

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          One day a child was born named Raymond Morientes, he was born to a family that was not well off. Raymond is a child who is kind and devoted to his parents and Raymond is a child who is responsive and smart enough. Raymond also often helps his father to work, his father's job is a job that everyone might be able to do easily, Raymond's father's job is a bus driver from another city to another and Raymond has never been ashamed of his parents' work but Raymond is very proud he has it father who can educate Raymond. But Raymond's life did not go smoothly like that, Raymond experienced the most important events in his life.

          So while his father was working, his father was accidentally hit by a very fast car and Raymond was very surprised and sad when he saw this incident. After that incident Keri was forced to work alone to be able to take care of her small family and to be able to provide for her daily needs with her sick mother. However, because their economy was so difficult that finally Raymond's mother could not go to the hospital, Raymond's mother was very sick, the temperature of Raymond's mother was very high and Raymond just prayed enough. Raymond does not want to experience a very painful life like this so Raymond decides to move to the city of Los Santos to find a new life and provide for Raymond's finances. Once he arrives in Los Santos, he will promise himself to work diligently in his new city, Los Santos. all the work he's ever experienced for example a workshop.

          And while working, he experiences difficulties such as customers who do not want to pay and are angry with his boss even though he is like that he still tries to work hard and get a lot of money In any way he will do something to get money to support the family he left behind and will try to be rich and be considered in the city.

 

 

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Questions

Tujuan membuat character story:
Ingin Mengembangkan Karakter Dan ingin memasuk Gang.

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
0Ace0

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Randarious_Paul

 

Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
6 bulan - 1 tahun

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di rumah

 

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Saya Randarious_Paul selaku pemilik account UCP 0Ace0 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Raymond_Morientes) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited January 8, 2021 by Randarious_Paul

[Nadeez]

Sebelum lanjut ke pemeriksaan stories, saya ingin bertanya. Tolong disebutkan level character kamu!

[Randarious_Paul]

Level saya, level 3 Min

[Nadeez]

Tolong font stories nya diperbaiki, jangan pakai warna serta background text nya juga, default saja. Untuk foto characternya, bisa diperkecil? Jika tidak halangi dengan spoiler.

[Randarious_Paul]

 

 

One day a child was born named Raymond Morientes, he was born to a family that was not well off. Raymond is a child who is kind and devoted to his parents and Raymond is a child who is responsive and smart enough. Raymond also often helps his father to work, his father's job is a job that everyone might be able to do easily, Raymond's father's job is a bus driver from another city to another and Raymond has never been ashamed of his parents' work but Raymond is very proud he has it father who can educate Raymond.

But Raymond's life did not go smoothly like that, Raymond experienced the most important events in his life. So while his father was working, his father was accidentally hit by a very fast car and Raymond was very surprised and sad when he saw this incident. After that incident Keri was forced to work alone to be able to take care of her small family and to be able to provide for her daily needs with her sick mother. However, because their economy was so difficult that finally Raymond's mother could not go to the hospital, Raymond's mother was very sick, the temperature of Raymond's mother was very high and Raymond just prayed enough. Raymond does not want to experience a very painful life like this so Raymond decides to move to the city of Los Santos to find a new life and provide for Raymond's finances.

Once he arrives in Los Santos, he will promise himself to work diligently in his new city, Los Santos. all the work he's ever experienced for example a workshop. And while working, he experiences difficulties such as customers who do not want to pay and are angry with his boss even though he is like that he still tries to work hard and get a lot of money In any way he will do something to get money to support the family he left behind and will try to be rich and be considered in the city.

 

Edited January 5, 2021 by Randarious_Paul

[Nadeez]

Diedit saja topicnya jangan direply kesini.

[Randarious_Paul]

11 jam yang lalu, xDannz said:

Diedit saja topicnya jangan direply kesini.

Sudah MIn

[Nadeez]

Stories nya dirapikan, dibuat 3 paragraf dengan rata kiri lebih baik.

[Randarious_Paul]

On 4/1/2021 at 14.57, xDannz said:

Stories nya dirapikan, dibuat 3 paragraf dengan rata kiri lebih baik.

Sudah min

[Nadeez]

Dibilang yang edit itu yang paling atas, jangan yang direply.

[Randarious_Paul]

@xDannz Sudah min

[Nadeez]

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To @Randarious_Paul

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account:

 

Sincerely,

@xDannz
JG:RP Staff Team.