MuhammadFarhan Posted November 9, 2020 Posted November 9, 2020 (edited) Aldrich_Bentley Aldrich Bentley is an American man born on March 15, 1999. Aldrich or what is usually called Rich is the only child from a family with low economic conditions. At the age of 5 years, Kaya was abandoned by his parents because he could no longer afford to support family life. Shortly after being dumped, Rich was adopted by one of the men who worked at an orphanage on the outskirts of town. The life of the orphanage is so hard and cruel that Griss is a tough, tough, responsible and hard working person. But sometimes Rich's bad character comes when Rich has a lot of thoughts, namely his temperamental nature. When his bad temper came out, Rich liked to beat and scold his younger siblings so that Rich was feared by the children of the orphanage. When Rich reached his maturity, Rich took a step to get out of the orphanage and said goodbye to leave the orphanage to the owner of the orphanage. The orphanage mother also gave advice to Rich so that he would maintain his behavior when he left the orphanage. The mother of the orphanage also advised Rich to visit Aunty at the orphanage in the city of Los Santos. This is because Auntie has a house that should be able to be occupied by Rich. A week of departure from the outskirts of London, Rich arrived at Ocean Docks Harbor, Los Santos. However, when he arrived in Los Santos, Rich could not contact Aunty at the orphanage. Rich went straight to Aunt's house according to the address given by the previous orphanage mother. When he arrived at Uncle's house, Rich knocked on the door to check if anyone was in the house or not. Not long after, an old woman came out of the house. After a long talk, it turned out that the house was no longer Aunty's house. The house has changed hands since two years ago. The old woman said that this house had previously been murdered where the victim was an old woman who came from London. How surprised Rich was when he heard the news. Rich, who was surprised, tried to calm down and said goodbye to the old woman. Rich, who walked in confusion, didn't know the direction, then stopped one of the dirty uninhabited houses on the outskirts of the village to be able to take shelter at night. For two days Rich did not leave the house because of heavy thoughts on him. Hungry Rich woke up and went to find food to one of the available eating places. At the restaurant, Rich meets one of the people who looks rich and is given a certain amount of money to survive in the city. The man who looked rich also gave an outline about the city of Los Santos, from places to eat, work, public places and several other important places. Armed with this person's knowledge, Rich started his life in Los Santos to survive alone so that his life could be better. Questions Tujuan membuat character story: agar bisa memakai asesoris, dan membeli flat. Account UCP yang saya miliki: CapungTerbang Account Forum yang saya miliki:MuhammadFarhan Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya MuhammadFarhan selaku pemilik account UCP CapungTerbang bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Aldrich_Bentley) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited November 9, 2020 by MuhammadFarhan
Jarvis Posted November 9, 2020 Posted November 9, 2020 Hallo Selagi saya memeriksa hasil CS anda, tolong di jawab terlebih dahulu. 1. Level berapakah kerakter yang anda mainkan sekarang ? 2. Apakah CS anda sudah 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph yang di beri jarak spasi ? 3. Sebutkan secara jujur UCP apa saja yang anda mainkan! 4. Sebutkan secara jujur anda bermain JG:RP di mana saja? (Rumah atau warnet) Note : Jangan melakukan SPAM di thread ini ataupun PM forum kepada admin yang bersangkutan, atau akan di delay atau di kunci sementara. Regards. Jarvis JG-Roleplay Moderator
MuhammadFarhan Posted November 9, 2020 Author Posted November 9, 2020 14 jam yang lalu, Jarvis said: Hallo Selagi saya memeriksa hasil CS anda, tolong di jawab terlebih dahulu. 1. Level berapakah kerakter yang anda mainkan sekarang ? 2. Apakah CS anda sudah 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph yang di beri jarak spasi ? 3. Sebutkan secara jujur UCP apa saja yang anda mainkan! 4. Sebutkan secara jujur anda bermain JG:RP di mana saja? (Rumah atau warnet) Note : Jangan melakukan SPAM di thread ini ataupun PM forum kepada admin yang bersangkutan, atau akan di delay atau di kunci sementara. Regards. Jarvis JG-Roleplay Moderator Hallo Juga.. Jawaban. 1. Level 3 Untuk sekarang. 2. Sudah lebih Setau Saya.. 3. Hanya 1 Yaitu.. (Capung Terbang) 4. Biasa di rumah, dan kadang kadang di warnet. Tambahan: Untuk nomer 4 saya lupa ka, Heheh Soal nyah kadang kalo laptop lagi di pake abang, suka maen di warnet.
Jarvis Posted November 9, 2020 Posted November 9, 2020 2 minutes ago, MuhammadFarhan said: Hallo Juga.. Jawaban. 1. Level 3 Untuk sekarang. 2. Sudah lebih Setau Saya.. 3. Hanya 1 Yaitu.. (Capung Terbang) 4. Biasa di rumah, dan kadang kadang di warnet. Tambahan: Untuk nomer 4 saya lupa ka, Heheh Soal nyah kadang kalo laptop lagi di pake abang, suka maen di warnet. Point 2 belum benar.
MuhammadFarhan Posted November 9, 2020 Author Posted November 9, 2020 14 jam yang lalu, Jarvis said: Point 2 belum benar. Mohon Maaf Bertanya.. Maksud dari point 2 apa tuh ka? jumlah kata apah gimana?
Jarvis Posted November 9, 2020 Posted November 9, 2020 21 minutes ago, Jarvis said: 3 paragraph yang di beri jarak spasi ?
MuhammadFarhan Posted November 9, 2020 Author Posted November 9, 2020 Gimana Ka? Otak saya nga nyampe.
Jarvis Posted November 9, 2020 Posted November 9, 2020 1 minute ago, MuhammadFarhan said: Gimana Ka? Otak saya nga nyampe. Duh, di sambungi pake kabel aja Kasih jarak antar paragrafnya gan
MuhammadFarhan Posted November 9, 2020 Author Posted November 9, 2020 14 jam yang lalu, Jarvis said: Duh, di sambungi pake kabel aja Kasih jarak antar paragrafnya gan Sudah kek gtiuh kah? #DIEDIT Maaf ka soal nyah dah lupa lagi saya buay CS, hehe.
Jarvis Posted November 9, 2020 Posted November 9, 2020 To @MuhammadFarhanI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@JarvisJG:RP Staff Team.
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