marcel07 Posted September 23, 2020 Posted September 23, 2020 (edited) Alberto_Salvador In 1997, a child named Alberto Salvador was born. Her father is an LSPD, and her mother is a doctor at ASGH. Alberto was raised adequately by his parents. he was neither very rich nor poor. When Alberto was 7 years old, his father often taught him martial arts. Alberto also sometimes complained that he was often tired when he studied martial arts with his father. but his father used to say to Alberto when he complained about martial arts training. "This is all for you son, father wants you to be a strong child in the future." Every night, before Alberto went to sleep, he often thought about what his father had said. Alberto thought, "Does martial arts training really affect my future?" At that time, Alberto still did not know how fierce the outside world was. His father taught him because his father used to be, often beaten by thugs at school, when his father was still in school. At the age of 8 years, Alberto started to enter elementary school. When he first entered elementary school, he sometimes felt happy, and sometimes he felt doubtful. because while he was there, he often got ridicule which made him sad and doubtful. 6 years later, when he was in 6th grade, he used to fight with bad school people. At that time, Alberto was never looking for trouble, but there was a classmate who at that time pushed him down during recess. Alberto responded with a powerful punch. his opponent collapsed in an instant. Alberto was summoned to the principal's office, and was ordered to call his parents. This made all the naughty 6th graders frightened when they saw Alberto. When Alberto got home, he told his father to come to school. The next day Alberto and his father went to school, his father had asked permission from his superiors to give him a minute. When he arrived at school, Alberto was told to enter the classroom, and his father went to the principal's office. The principal of the school, warned his father to take care of his child more because his son had hit his friend until he passed out. After chatting with Alberto's father with the principal, Alberto's father returned to the LSPD office and carried out his duties. The afternoon arrived, his father came home from work and immediately picked up Alberto at school to ask about this. When he got home, his father immediately asked Albero firmly, "Daddy answered, why did you beat your friend at school until you fainted ?!" Alberto also answered firmly "I didn't beat him, I just repaid his actions, he started it first. pushed me down and laughed at by people. " His father was shocked to hear Alberto's words. then his father said to Alberto "what you did was not wrong, I am proud of you son". Alberto was ordered to return to his room and do his schoolwork. while sleeping. When Alberto entered the room, he promised not to forget his father's words. When Alberto was 17 years old, his father and mother had a fatal accident and died. at the funeral, Alberto was very sad and angry. She is sad because of the loss of her parents, and she is angry because of the person who ran them. Alberto also tried to be independent because he didn't have anyone else. When Alberto was 23 years old, Alberto wanted to visit the LSPD headquarters where his father worked. he wanted to ask if the culprit who hit his father's run had been caught. but when he was about to ask, he began to feel hungry in his stomach. he went to the canteen to have a quick meal. while eating, there were 2 LSPD members talking. Alberto heard their conversation about his father. They said, "it's not the son of a high-ranking LSPD member who died because of being sabotaged by the commander." "Husst, don't talk like that. He will hear, the commander paid us to shut up, what if he hears later, we can fire him." Hearing the conversation between the two LSPD members, Alberto felt resentment towards the LSPD. At that time, Alberto also swore he hated the LSPD, and would make trouble for the city. but Alberto thought, he might not be able to cause trouble for the city himself, so he entered one of Jefferson's alleys. at that point, the game began. Continued....... Questions Tujuan membuat character story: Untuk membagikan cerita dari karakter saya. Account UCP yang saya miliki: MarcellSmith Account Forum yang saya miliki:marcel07 Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP: kurang dari 1 bulan Saya biasa main JGRP di: Hanya di rumah Saya marcel07 selaku pemilik account UCP MarcellSmith bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Alberto_Salvador) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited October 1, 2020 by marcel07 Di bagian berapa lama main di JGRP, saya perbaiki, karena saya mengira itu berapa lama saya main roleplay, maaf saya kurang teliti.
Tiak Posted September 24, 2020 Posted September 24, 2020 Perbaiki penggunaan huruf kapital di kata yang seharusnya tidak menggunakan huruf kapital.
marcel07 Posted September 27, 2020 Author Posted September 27, 2020 On 9/24/2020 at 1:57 PM, Tiak said: Perbaiki penggunaan huruf kapital di kata yang seharusnya tidak menggunakan huruf kapital. Sudah di edit min.
marcel07 Posted October 3, 2020 Author Posted October 3, 2020 Mohon pada admin, untuk melihat CS saya, sudah seminggu saya menunggu.
Tiak Posted October 4, 2020 Posted October 4, 2020 To @marcel07I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,TiakJG:RP Staff Team.
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