Skilled Posted June 5, 2020 Posted June 5, 2020 (edited) Jair_Gutierrez Jair Gutierrez was born into a middle class family in Rome, He was the youngest of six, being the only male out of five older sisters was tough, especially for a itallian family. While his mother was english, His father was itallian, It was difficult to appease both of his parents, whereas his sisters seemed to get a lot of praise. After an argument with both of his parents, He was officially frozen from his family and their restaurant, Jair feeling left out and ashamed of himself left the area and moved to the outskirts of rome, in a little area called Millan.Jair started to have nightmares about his family getting murdered in his old area in rome, He gained cold sweats and sleep apnea from the repeated nightmares and one day he got a phone call from a detective asking where he was and if they could meet up in person. Jair Agrees tomeet the detective at a local coffee shop where he could see him coming in and suspicions came through his mind about the detective getting followed, Once the detective arrived jair made him wait for 15 minsbefore asking him for his badge just so he can check he wasn't being followed, Jair paranoia has kicked in and he thinkseveryone is out to get him, Once the detective shown Jair the badge Jair finally relaxed a little bit but he was still maintaining his vision outside the window to check. The detective finally started to speak and asked how Jair was and if he heard from his family since he moved away to the outskirts Jair replied with “no, not since the fight”. The detective asked about the fight and jair ignored him and didn't answer, He was thinking that something Jhas definitely happened to his family for a detective to come all this way and asked a few questions about his family and why jair isn't around where he grew up The Detective started talking to Jair and informed him of the bad news stating that his family has beenmurdered and that they might be looking forhim. Jair began realizing that he can't go back home and that they would try to find him in the outskirts eventually so he got his belongings togetherand left that day after speaking to the detective. Feeling angry and depressed he started to think about things “Suicidal thought started to begin and they increase while he was en route to the train station”. He noticed a strange man near a back alley near the coffee shop, the man asked if he had any spare change, Jair checked his pockets and got out a few coins and gives it to the man, Jair notices that he had some tablets that relaxes him and he asked if he could take a few to calm himself down, The guy asked if there was anything wrong and if he could help, Jair asked if he had any firearms and the strange guy asked why, “Jair quoted Self Defence and told him the situation”,The strange man gives Jair a pistol with a few spare magazines. He took the firearm from the man and puts it behind his back in his jeans, He put the magazines in his inside pocket, He started to notice that their was 2 men was following him with a black suit, They looked very well dressed and they kept their hands in their pockets of their suit grabbing on to something, Jair started to walk faster and faster until he started to run away and he ended up in an alley with nowhere to run, Jair hid behind the bin with his weapon in his hand, He takes off the safety and starts to aim at the corner of the alley waiting for them to catch up, Once jair sees the men running around the corner he let’s few shots off hitting them in the shoulder, They fall to the ground in pain and jair jumps from his advantage from the behind the bin and starts to question them about his family Death, The men started talking and shouting at jair stating that “He’s gonna be next and he killed his parents and his sisters for fun and his parents owed them money and they didn't pay”. Jair was getting angry and at the end of the conversation jair aimed the gun at them and shot 2 shots and shot them both in the head so they can't give their boss any info on what happened or where jair was.Jair starts to search for their ID, searching their warm body, He opens up the suit and starts going through their pockets, Jair started to look confused as they didn’t have any ID on them just 2 firearms - magazines and 2,500 each in cash, After taken the cash from them he started to withdraw their weapons from their body and he withdrew their magazines from their pockets and from the firearms and left the body’s their, looking at them thinking I could of died their but they messed up, Jair walked from the alleyway looking around to see if anyone was around thinking to himself some one must of heard the gunshots and called the police, Jair rushed down the road to the subway going down the stairs to the ticket machine, He bought a ticket to go to the main capital on the train to go to the Urbe Airport to get a plane to Los Santos where his new life would begin.Jair finally on his way to Urbe airport and he's been thinking what's actually been happening since he's been away and why his family been murdered, He's on the train thinking to himself why and he starts sweating and looking around and he finally looks out of the window and sees more suited people at the next station, Jair just sits there and wondering if they get on the train, "Couple more stops he's thinking" He finally arrives to Urbe airport and stands in front of the clerk.He asks for a ticket to Los Santos and he gives the clerk behind the counterdollars for the plane ticket, Jair finally says to himself before boarding the plane that he's finally free from the people that murdered his family without knowing that he will get to find out what happened to them soon enough. After 6 hours of flying and sitting in the same seat, He gets uncomfortable and gets up to go to the toilet before he does so he hears a ping coming from the speakers above his head “Hello and thank you for travelling i am your attendant, Please put your seatbelt on as we are going to landing in the next10 mins thank you” Jair Sits back down eaglery moving his hands crossing his legs deeply in thought, He’s feeling happy, sad,scared and loads of other emotions that he has finally arrived in Los Santos - World Of opportunity. 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abeltras777 Posted June 5, 2020 Posted June 5, 2020 Mohon jujur, ada berapa UCP yang kamu gunakan dan miliki saat ini.
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Skilled Posted June 5, 2020 Author Posted June 5, 2020 Itu kawan saya min,dulu itu saya ga maen jg min saya cuma ngeliatin saya baru maen jg karena ajakan dari dari rizal 1913 anti pelopor min saya dulu maen pb dan samp lainnya dulu saya kaga maen jg sama sekali min sumpah itu kawan saya dulunya suka ngacak ngacak server min saya disitu cuma ngeliatin doang min kalo kawan saya maen min dan hanya maen pb dan samp lagi pula server lainnya min
abeltras777 Posted June 6, 2020 Posted June 6, 2020 Oke, bastard12, buttercup, uvuvwevwevweuvuvwevwevwe, kontolgaceng, tt2019, silumankontol, tikosirajacoli, xxxtentacion, Brepek410, Home 121. UCP yang saya jabarkan diatas punya teman kamu juga? Sekarang sudah tidak main di server ini bukan?
abeltras777 Posted June 7, 2020 Posted June 7, 2020 Oke, UCP diatas saya block. Input foto pada cerita kamu dan rapikan kembali paragraf kamu menjadi 3 paragraf serta gunakan fasilitas justify.
Skilled Posted June 8, 2020 Author Posted June 8, 2020 sudah min tolong respown dong min @abeltras777
abeltras777 Posted June 8, 2020 Posted June 8, 2020 Perbaiki grammar kamu, beberapa masih ada yang salah. Dan jadikan cerita kamu menjadi 3 paragraf dan hingga terlihat rapi.
abeltras777 Posted June 9, 2020 Posted June 9, 2020 Sesuai yang sebelumnya, tolong jadikan tiga paragraf, kenapa malah fontnya mengecil? Kok jadi berantakan. Tolong perbaiki
abeltras777 Posted June 10, 2020 Posted June 10, 2020 To @NamaForumI am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account: Sincerely,@NamaStaffJG:RP Staff Team.
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