pending Dwayne_Rutledge [Claudialestari]

[Albar Urbe-x Poeple]

Dwayne_Rutledge

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         Dwayne Rutledge, Born on the 14th of December 1993. Eurasian in terms of race, Irish on his mother's side and Japanese on his father's side. His mother was a neurological CCU nurse working at a hospital located in West Vinewood. His father, a Japanese businessman who owned a chain of automotive warehouses located in the Los Santos area. He dresses rather casually, often opting for practicality and comfort over style. Though them is not to say he doesn't know how to dress fashionably.

 

         Dwayne Grew up living in a well-established home in the Vinewood Hills area, being raised by his full-time nanny as his parents were too consumed by work. The business was not going well for his father, his customer base flocking to rival companies. His mother had to work double shifts to make up for the shift in finances. Dwayne spent most of his childhood studying, playing video games, or keeping with his books. He did not have many friends as he was often kept at home. As busy as his parents were, they were quite protective of their son. He was not to leave the house unannounced or before being granted permission, nor was he permitted to have friends over. Due to the lack of social exposure, he finds himself out of place in crowds.

 

         Dwayne is now in his early twenties, He holds both a diploma and a degree in arts and design. He has since moved out of his parents' home, now living on his own. His works were sold graphical designs for Motorcycle helmets and custom masks online. Having only a small home in South Los Santos in a neighborhood called Chamberlain Hills, he works from home, in a small room fitted as a makeshift machine workshop. His income fluctuates due to his inconsistent clientele and lack of staff and equipment. He hopes to find his own automotive decal company, Selling custom decals for both cars and motorcycles.

 

 

 

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Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Claudialestari

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Albar Urbe-x Poeple

 

Berapa lama saya sudah main di JGRP:
1 - 3 bulan

 

Saya biasa main JGRP di:
Hanya di rumah

 

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Saya Albar Urbe-x Poeple selaku pemilik account UCP Claudialestari bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Dwayne_Rutledge) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited May 22, 2020 by Albar Urbe-x Poeple

[Arcane]

Hai, saya sudah mereview Character Story kamu dan masih ada yang harus diubah.

• Grammar masih banyak yang salah, coba diperhatikan lagi.
• Ada kata yang typo, diperhatikan lagi.
• Ada penempatan kata dan tanda baca yang kurang tepat, diperhatikan lagi.

[Albar Urbe-x Poeple]

17 minutes ago, DanqiYTB said:

Hai, saya sudah mereview Character Story kamu dan masih ada yang harus diubah.

• Grammar masih banyak yang salah, coba diperhatikan lagi.
• Ada kata yang typo, diperhatikan lagi.
• Ada penempatan kata dan tanda baca yang kurang tepat, diperhatikan lagi.

Done.

[Arcane]

55 minutes ago, Albar Urbe-x Poeple said:

Dwayne Rutledge, Born on the 14th of December 1993. Eurasian in terms of race, Irish on him mother's side and Japanese on him father's side. Him mother was a neurological CCU nurse working at a hospital located in West Vinewood. Him father, a Japanese businessman who owned a chain of automotive warehouses located in the Los Santos Area. He dresses rather casually, often opting for practicality and comfort over style. Though thim is not to say he doesn't know how to dress fashionably.

 

         Dwayne Grew up living in a well-established home in the Vinewood Hills area, being raised by him full-time nanny as him parents were too consumed by work. Business was not going well for him father, him customer base flocking to rival companies. Him mother had to work double shifts to make up for the shift in finances. Dwayne spent most of him childhood studying, playing video games or keeping to him books. He did not have many friends as he was often kept at home. As busy as him parents were, they were quite protective of their son. He was not to leave the house unannounced or before being granted permission, nor was he permitted to have friends over. Due to the lack of social exposure, he finds himself out of place in crowds.

 

         Dwayne is now in him early twenties, He holds both a diploma and a degree in arts and design. He has since moved out of him parents home, now living on him own. He works selling graphical designs for Motorcycle helmets and custom masks online. Having only a small home in South Los Santos in a neighborhood called Chamberlain Hills, he works from home, in a small room fitted as a makeshift machine workshop. Him income fluctuates due to him inconsistent clientele and lack of staff and equipment. He hopes to found him own automotive decal company, Selling custom decals for both cars and motorcycles.

• Semua him ganti menjadi his.
• Area tidak memerlukan huruf kapital.
• Business ganti menjadi The business.
• games or keeping ganti menjadi games, or keeping.

[Albar Urbe-x Poeple]

Done.

 

[Arcane]

1 hour ago, Albar Urbe-x Poeple said:

Dwayne Rutledge, Born on the 14th of December 1993. Eurasian in terms of race, Irish on His mother's side and Japanese on His father's side. His mother was a neurological CCU nurse working at a hospital located in West Vinewood. His father, a Japanese businessman who owned a chain of automotive warehouses located in the Los Santos area. He dresses rather casually, often opting for practicality and comfort over style. Though them is not to say he doesn't know how to dress fashionably.

 

         Dwayne Grew up living in a well-established home in the Vinewood Hills area, being raised by His full-time nanny as His parents were too consumed by work. business was not going well for His father, His customer base flocking to rival companies. His mother had to work double shifts to make up for the shift in finances. Dwayne spent most of His childhood studying, playing video games,or keeping with His books. He did not have many friends as he was often kept at home. As busy as His parents were, they were quite protective of their son. He was not to leave the house unannounced or before being granted permission, nor was he permitted to have friends over. Due to the lack of social exposure, he finds himself out of place in crowds.

 

         Dwayne is now in His early twenties, He holds both a diploma and a degree in arts and design. He has since moved out of His parents' home, now living on His own. His works were sold graphical designs for Motorcycle helmets and custom masks online. Having only a small home in South Los Santos in a neighborhood called Chamberlain Hills, he works from home, in a small room fitted as a makeshift machine workshop. His income fluctuates due to His inconsistent clientele and lack of staff and equipment. He hopes to find His own automotive decal company, Selling custom decals for both cars and motorcycles.

• Itu his gaperlu kapital, ngapain kamu berikan kapital, ubah lagi jangan kasih kapital.
• The business, bukan business saja.
• "games, or keeping" bukan games,or keeping, perhatikan spasinya.

[Albar Urbe-x Poeple]

30 minutes ago, DanqiYTB said:

• Itu his gaperlu kapital, ngapain kamu berikan kapital, ubah lagi jangan kasih kapital.
• The business, bukan business saja.
• "games, or keeping" bukan games,or keeping, perhatikan spasinya.

sudah min.

[Arcane]

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To @Albar Urbe-x Poeple

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