Albert_McChain [wyn]

[Wisnu_Yoga]

Character: Albert_McChain

Story:

            Albert McChain was born in 24 April 1994 in London, United Kingdom. He has one brother and two sisters. His parents were the richest person in London at that time. His parents were running a textile company which has a huge profit. Albert McChain was study in London Primary School, London Elementary School, and London High School. He was a clever boy. Three years of study in High School, he got the second best student in his school, and he was graduated. After finishing his study in London High School, he decided to ran his parent’s business. He decided not to went to University, he thought that he didn’t need that because he was already had much money. After running his parent’s business for two years after finished his high school, suddenly what an unexpected thing come. His father was sick and his mother left him by running away most of their assets. His mother married another man. Since he left by his mother, McChain needed to pay his father’s hospital bills. And it cost half of their wealth at that time, until his father sadly died.

            Albert McChain was very sad. He didn’t know what to do because he had already lost his wealth. Then he decided to live in a small house with his brother and sisters. He sold his old house to keep it in the future, living in a small house in Birmingham City. His life was become very poor, he hadn’t money and he must keep his brothers went to school. So, he decided to went to Los Santos to met his uncle on the side of Jefferson street. He went to Los Santos at that time, directly from London to meet his uncle. After McChain met his uncle, he started his new life in Los Santos to fulfill his needs and to pay his brother’s school fee. Luckily, his uncle still owning an old cabbie. So, he asked his uncle to worked as a taxi driver, and his uncle agreed. At that time, McChain worked as a taxi driver until there is a good announcement from the LSPD. Yes, a new police academy recruitment was opened. He tried to register in LSPD. After some months waiting for the result, yes, he accepted as a new Cadet!

­­            Albert McChain had a better life after he joined LSPD for some years, and he bought a new car by using his salary. On September 21st 2015, suddenly his sister called him by a phone. She told that his brother got a car accident and had a critical condition. McChain decided to went back to London. A month after his brother got accident, his brother was disabled. He can’t walk, a hard decision for McChain to take care of his brother because his sisters were in University and need to finish their study. McChain asked Mr. Deacon Hondo, his Police Chief at that time, asked him to make a resign from LSPD. And Albert McChain officially had resigned from LSPD and live back to London with his brother.

            In 2019, poorly his brother was dead. He had a critical condition which made his body turned skinny. At that time, the smallest house in London became so quiet. McChain decided to go back to Los Santos. He still had his Sultan bought some years ago. But sadly, his uncle was dead because he was already old. And at that time, he decided to continue his life in Los Santos by buying a brand-new taxi, and worked as a taxi driver until a miracle comes up like years before. In Los Santos unexpected thing comes up. He met his childhood friends Salvatorio, Arlo, Andrew, Leon, and Solihin (his friend from Indonesia which his parent was moved to London before). And with his friends, McChain attempts to build his life again from zero by being a local farmer in a public field. He made some profit with it and his friends are always help him. Now, Albert McChain live with his friends in a used place near the ocean of Flint County.

 

 

 

Saya Wisnu_Yoga selaku pemilik account UCP wyn bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Albert_McChain) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited July 19, 2019 by Wisnu_Yoga
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[Wisnu_Yoga]

14 minutes ago, NotAdmin said:



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To @Wisnu_Yoga

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to PENDING your request.

Reasoning for said pending is listed below:

1. Foto tidak perlu diberi spoiler dan diletakkan di awal story (Pastikan foto berletak di tengah/center).
2. Suatu paragraf terdiri dari tiga hingga tujuh kalimat, perbaiki kembali di setiap paragraf yang anda buat.

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

@NotAdmin
JG:RP Staff Team

Done, please check it thankyou

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To @Wisnu_Yoga

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[Wisnu_Yoga]

1 minute ago, NotAdmin said:

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To @Wisnu_Yoga

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to APPROVE your request. Please read the following guide to activate your link your store to your In-Game account:

 

Sincerely,

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Thanks gan  keep it up your good work